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Promises: Bent, Not Broken

Wednesday, December 30, 2009

Next in the Keeping On 'Verse. Lilah has an emotional breakdown, and gets some insight from the one person she never thought would give it: Mal.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2696    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Promises: Bent, Not Broken

Disclaimer: Firefly, Serenity, and all related characters are copyright 2002-2005 Mutant Enemy, Inc., Universal Pictures, and 20th Century Fox. This is a work of fanfiction. No copyright infringement is intended.

Author's Note: This is a small one-shot. Lilah takes center stage in this, with help from leading male Mal (in true Mal fashion). The crew is here too. Hopefully you all will enjoy this.


Six years ago…

“Guess who?”

A pair of hands wrapped around her face from behind, blocking her vision. With a sigh, she put her knitting down and brought her hands up to cover the pair on her face. The hands beneath hers were warm and calloused and if she inhaled just the right way, they smelled like cedar.

“Whoever could you be?” She asked.

“I’ll give you three hints, okay?” The voice whispered by her ear, low and thrilling.

“Okay then.” She’d play along.

“Hint number one: I married you. Hint number two: I’ve been working in the shed all week. Hint number three: I just finished making our new bed and I think it’s time we test it out.”

The hands peeled away from her face and she turned her face up to see the face of her husband, who was grinning wickedly with heat in his eyes. She shivered at the look he was giving her… he never failed to make her feel like she was the focus of his universe.

“Those where horrible hints, Wendell,” she teased. “It’s a good thing you’re so damn wonderful and lovable.”

“Yeah well, subtle seduction has never been my strong point, Lilah.” He cupped her cheek with one hand and caressed her shoulder with his other.

“You mean subtlety, period, has never been your strong point.” She leaned up to kiss him, ignoring the awkward angle and what it would do to her neck if it went on too long.

“So, are you going to help me carry the bed in so that we can properly break it in?” Wendell asked, breaking the kiss gently and leaning his forehead to hers.

Lilah stood and turne

Comments
Wednesday, 30 December 2009 23:31
Awesome. I truly love your OC Lilah. I suspect, Mal should have had that same conversation with Zoe too.



Bri
Thursday, 31 December 2009 05:12
You seem to always wait till I just start to forget about your story and then post another part. Good to see you are still writing.
Thursday, 31 December 2009 17:30
Ouch. Poor Lilah. Mal's not wrong here. Kind of needs to take his own advice though. Ah, but that's what you have to love about Mal, the disconnect in his brain that lets him do crime while still trying to stay noble, that lets him be miserable and bitter about his own losses while advising people how to get over theirs. That's how he shows he cares, and because he still is a good person, you root for him to come to terms with his own past too.

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