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CHOICES - Part 14 D

Friday, March 13, 2009

Time for healing...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3733    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Word Count: approx. 2402

Spoilers: Post-Series, Pre-Those Left Behind

Paring: Mal/Inara, Crew

Rating: PG

Author's Note: Still toiling away, slowly but kinda surely. The end grows closer.

Thanks as always to the loverly anjulie for graciously reading this over when I forced it down her chat window ;o)

Oh yeah, and I’ve taken away the ‘Epilogue’ for Part 14, because it’s gone way past being an Epilogue and into a full part, so… that’s where I’m at! :o) Thanks for reading!

Title: CHOICES – Part 14 D

Author: 2x2

By the middle of the next day, Simon decreed Inara stable enough to continue her bed rest in her shuttle, regularly supervised and monitored, and would likely soon be able to eat real food – or at least as real as it got on Serenity.

Inara was relieved, having quickly wearied of her inactivity and the sterility of her surroundings. Not that she wasn’t grateful for all Simon had and was doing for her, and she certainly had no lack of company; quite the opposite, in fact. But she felt exposed in the infirmary, and she longed for the soft comfort of her own bed and silks and the welcome privacy of some genuine solitude.

There was a great deal she still had to sort through and process, not the least of which was finding out what had actually happened to her once she and Mal had been whisked aboard the ship; Simon had put off her questions and none of the crew would discuss it when she prompted. She was seriously beginning to wonder if Mal hadn’t threatened them all with promises to kick them off the ship or throw them out the airlock or some such nonsense because no one was talking – all in an effort to spare her, she was certain, but the not-knowing was driving her mad. It was causing her more anxiety than if they would just come out and tell her. She gathered it must have been a near thing from the way they all avoided her eyes when she asked, but she was fine now if a little tired; had all her fingers and toes and other extremities and, as far as she could tell, was

Comments
Saturday, 14 March 2009 02:11
Been looking forward to this fic for a long time and you sure didn't disappoint! Oh the angst of two people who deserve each other really screwing things up bad between them and thinking they're doing each other a favor. I love your characterizations and hope for a happy ending somewhere.
Saturday, 14 March 2009 12:23
Hopefully as both Inara and Mal start to heal they will be able to drop the last of the barriers they keep between them. At the moment both of them are pretty fragile but they have the best doctor and crew in the whole 'verse. The ship is pretty shiny too! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 14 March 2009 16:05
Can really empathize with Inara's grief, here, nicely done and poor Mal, he needs to understand that Inara doesn't want to seem weak in his eyes.
FIRENITYFANATIC
Thursday, 26 March 2009 18:32
Wow, this story is incredible. I started reading it a few days ago. It just sucked me. The detail you put into it, it's almost like watching a movie but reading it. :D

Poor Inara, she finally wakes up but is told that she may never work again because of Whelt did. And then pushind Mal away. It's just horrible.

I understand why she pushes him away but it's still sad.

Great writing. :D

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