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Keeping On: Part 6 - Captains and Crew

Wednesday, March 4, 2009

A year after the Miranda broadcast, Mal and Zoe struggle to keep their family together and keep flying as situations begin to build on Serenity. <i>Captains and Crew</i>: Mal and Zoe meet their potential new pilot. Later, Mal and Monty each have words with a member of their crew.

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Keeping On: Part 6 - Captains and Crew

Disclaimer: Firefly, Serenity, and all related characters are copyright 2002-2005 Mutant Enemy, Inc., Universal Pictures, and 20th Century Fox. This is a work of fanfiction. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Mal and Zoe waited patiently in the bar, amusing themselves with the game of Chinese checkers. Zoe, as always, beat Mal soundly. Apparently the man could plan heists, outwit foes, and command a majority of the Independent soldiers, but couldn’t find a good enough strategy to outwit Zoe.

“I didn’t know better, Zo, I’d say you’re a reader.” Mal said, annoyed.

“Only have one of those on board, Mal, and it ain’t me.” Zoe replied, smiling widely as she beat Mal for the third time.

“Aw hell, Mal, she whip yer pi gu again? You’re kinda useless sometimes.” Said a good-natured voice.

Mal and Zoe looked up.

Monty stood there, grinning, shaking his head at Mal’s horrific luck at checkers.

And standing there with him was a dark-haired woman, no older than Zoe, it looked like. She was medium complexioned and had very dark almond-shaped eyes. Her hair was long and wavy – almost unruly, and she couldn’t have been any taller than Kaylee. She had a vaguely amused expression and Mal noticed the gun hanging at her hip, almost hidden by a dark jacket.

Mal smiled.

“Miss Linn, I believe?” He asked, standing and giving the charming smile he liked to give when starting to negotiate business.

“Ms. Linn,” she corrected, softly but firmly. “Ms. Lilah Linn.” Her posture was straight and she was looking him in the eye. She was definitely some kind of a soldier. He thought.

“Well then, Ms. Linn, I’m Captain Malcolm Reynolds. This here with me is Zoe Washburne. She’s first mate onboard Serenity. Care to sit?” He gestured to the two empty chairs.

She sat down, and after a second’s hesitation, Monty did as well.

“Monty here tells us that you’re lookin’ for work. Pilot job, if you can get it.”

Comments
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 09:01
Still interesting.
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 13:33
I think the new pilot could be something of a revelation. Not sure what River really wants to do though. In the series River actually loved flying, loved the ship and was so in tune and intuitive that she was a natural so it is interesting seeing you have her a reluctant pilot. I'm guessing you did that in order to have a reason to bring Lilah on board. And I like it that Monty has fatherly feelings towards Lilah, wanting to do the best for the girl as well as help his friends on Serenity get a shiny new pilot. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 20:27
@Amdobell, I never really got the impression that it was something she loved, considering that River only flew in the very last minutes of <i>Serenity</i>. She's damn good at it, I believe, but I can't really say that she loved it given that it was at the end of the movie and we have no post-Serenity canon from Joss.

More than anything I saw that scene in the movie as a nice bonding moment between River and Mal, as well as a way to show that River was indeed better than she'd been since the pilot of Firefly and that River loves <i>Serenity</i> and thinks of the ship as home. River does love the ship and does want to stay and help, which she will.

As for Monty, he loves picking up strays. (And at least she didn't turn out to be a woman who'd make him shave his whiskers like that last woman he picked up. ;D) He's also a good friend to the crew in this story, and he comes back in the stories I have planned after this one is finished. :D

Thanks for the comment - you always leave such nice ones. They're very much appreciated!

@Nutluck, I'm hoping that it's a good interesting. :D

Thanks for reviewing!
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 20:27
@Amdobell, I never really got the impression that it was something she loved, considering that River only flew in the very last minutes of <i>Serenity</i>. She's damn good at it, I believe, but I can't really say that she loved it given that it was at the end of the movie and we have no post-Serenity canon from Joss.

More than anything I saw that scene in the movie as a nice bonding moment between River and Mal, as well as a way to show that River was indeed better than she'd been since the pilot of Firefly and that River loves <i>Serenity</i> and thinks of the ship as home. River does love the ship and does want to stay and help, which she will.

As for Monty, he loves picking up strays. (And at least she didn't turn out to be a woman who'd make him shave his whiskers like that last woman he picked up. ;D) He's also a good friend to the crew in this story, and he comes back in the stories I have planned after this one is finished. :D

Thanks for the comment - you always leave such nice ones. They're very much appreciated!

@Nutluck, I'm hoping that it's a good interesting. :D

Thanks for reviewing!
Thursday, 05 March 2009 04:36
I really liked the way you introduced the character and am wondering what mysteries she is bringing with her. She seems the perceptive sort, but why does she consider Mal an idiot?
Sunday, 08 March 2009 23:24
@Katesfriend - Lilah doesn't get Mal and his quirks, and underestimates him. It's a callback to Patience in the pilot of Serenity; she declared him 'not very bright' and was later very surprised.

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