Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Goin' Home Ch. 22/23

Saturday, December 6, 2008

Last two.

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CHAPTER 22

Hera: 13 Months Ago, Mossberg Salvage

Now that I’ve given in and decided to stay looks like I’ll be needin’ a place of my own. Stayin’ in Jeb’s spare room is nice an’ all, but won’t hardly do for the long run. Cain’t entertain a lady, should things go that way, and nowhere just to be by myself ‘cept to head on out for a walk.

Big ol’ Blue Sun shipping container over yonder might do. Far enough from everything around for some privacy, decent start to a roof over my head, won’t have to start from scratch buildin’ anything. Might as well take a look.

Some junk scattered around the outside. That’d have to get cleaned up. Look at junk all day, don’t wanna live with it too. Other’n some rust the box don’t look too bad.

Pull open these doors and check inside. Huh, other’n’s stuck. Little heat and some lube oughtta take care of that. Smells musty, prolly ain’t been opened in a good while. Liner’s got mildew, have to tear it all out. Get all this gorram crap outta here. Boards. Paint tins. Sumthin’ under a tarp down to the other end, likely just more junk. Yup, got possibilities.

Talk it over with Jeb tonight. Might need to sweeten the pot a touch. Hmmm.....take half pay and some salvage to outfit the box? Might do. Or, could just put in more hours. See what he says.

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Hera: Approximately 1 AM, The Merc Ship

Well that takes care of the ship. Put the card back, powered everything back up. Disconnected that shit-rig work-around on the actuators. Don’t want ‘em blowin’ up afore they’re a looong ways aways.

Cleaned out the merc’s stash of weapons on board. Got the launcher they blew up my baby with, that’ll come in handy to make sure they leave without a fuss. Best get back and finish this off. Barty cain’t get off this rock soon enough to suit me.

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“ Awright then, here’s how it is”, I tell ‘em. “ You all get on that hunk of junk and make tracks outta h

Comments
Saturday, 06 December 2008 17:43
Great wind up to an excellent tale. You've got a strong, fresh style, and your clear character voicing really helps give me a sense of your man. I enjoyed the gradually building tension and loved the show tie-in at the tail. Two thumbs up, JT.
Saturday, 06 December 2008 20:26
Well, thank ye kindly, ma'am. Can't say as it weren't fun and all, but doubt as there'll be a sequel. Funny thing is, once it got going, the story just took off running, went a whole lot of different places I never saw coming. It was all I could do paddling to keep up.

I agree that mixing back and main story could be tough to follow sometimes. Won't do that again. Had originally thought to write this as a screen play, whole lot easier that way.

For now, I'm gonna stick with making things outta metal. Got a fan-related project almost done, should be posted in graphics a few days from now.

Glad you enjoyed the tale. Tried to keep it as real as I could.

And yes, I really DO talk like that. LOL
Monday, 08 December 2008 08:56
A sequel would be good, but I enjoyed the ride. I know what you mean about something taking off under its own steam - had that myself once in a while. But keep writing, because us Browncoats need to stick together!

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