Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Angelle in Brown (Part 1)

Tuesday, December 2, 2008

A writing assignment that I thought you would all be interested in..a college course to sharpen my writing skills and my coach asked me to put one of my OWN characters into a television show world where she did not exactly fit. So here is my Angelle in a story that I hope you will enjoy. This is only the firat part of the assignment and if you enoy, I will post more as I finish. BTW, I dedicate this to my friends and fellow writers Jane 0904 and AMDOBELL for their support and for their encouragement. Jane , this is why you couldn't use the name. LOL!!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3550    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Angelle is mine, the rest is Joss's.

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Persephone...beautiful, serene, and the fastest place for a hired killer like myself to find a decent ride to get from here to there. Besides, it also gave me an excuse to check out the new dresses and maybe grab a new pair of shoes. You never know when you might get asked out to a fancy shindig and not have a thing to wear.

Name's Angelle. Was born in the middle of a Bayou planet this side of nowhere and a little left of don't care. Had a father, who was the brownest Browncoat I have ever met and a mother, who loved my big brother far more than me. Think it had something to do with the fact everyone in our little spec of a village thought my brother and I had been switched at birth. He learned to quilt and I learned the proper way to stitch up a knife wound. My first was on myself. Those gators can be right angry when you get caught stealing their eggs out from under them.

Maybe that's why the Academy wanted my brother and not me, though I suspect my father destroyed my letter for fear of losing me to those Alliance bastards. My mother had never been prouder and made sure to read that wretched piece of paper to everyone and at every function until the day he left. Sadly and I truly mean that (wink wink) it somehow got misplaced after that, later to be found tore to bits by the dog size rats we shared our town with.

If ever my father was right, he could gloat as to how right he was about the Academy. In less than a month, my brother stopped writing my mother and within three, we received his body home in a coffin. They had said he was taking drugs and ODed, but no one took better care of his body than my brother. I knew something just wasn't right and as we all mourned his loss, I readied myself for what I knew would be the next step.

We had fought in the War, or at least, my dad and his buddies did. He wanted to me to stay home and take care of my family. I hated him for it. Everyone knew I had a talent to

Comments
Tuesday, 02 December 2008 08:58
Good start! It's always fun to see our crew from another perspective, and so far I like Angelle. And I won't hold the fact that I couldn't use the name against you! Looking forward to much, much more.
Tuesday, 02 December 2008 10:50
Oh, I loved this. Chuckled all the way through it and can't wait for more though what Angelle wants on Whitefall is a mystery unless it is to pepper a certain old ornery back-stabbing crone called Patience with more than her fair share of ventilation. Great start! Ali D :~)
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Tuesday, 02 December 2008 14:15
Ohhh wonderful beginning!! Please, post more I am hooked already!!
Tuesday, 02 December 2008 22:54
I think this may be the best thing you've ever written... it's fantastic, and I can't wait to read more.
Wednesday, 03 December 2008 05:11
Really good and I can't wait for more.

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