Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

She's Tore Up Plenty ...

Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Zoe's the first one back to the ship after the battle with the Reavers and Alliance is over.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1657    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The cargo bay has done sat open to the atmosphere for days now, so it smells like, well, it smells like this desolate moon, which don’t smell like much of anything – leastways not now that the torn up bodies have been removed. But as she climbs up to the next level, entering the smaller, more constrained areas of the ship, Zoe smells the fruity scent of Alliance disinfectant – the same scent that lingers on her skin from the Medic Ship, the scent she’d hoped to wash off once home.

Knicks mar the metal of the corridor walls, catching the skin of her fingers as she probes a gash a good foot and a half long, shining new-metal bright even in the low light, the patina of living scrapped away by crudely made sharp-edged weapons. She presses her hand to the wall momentarily and then keeps moving. Nothing major’s hurt – ship’ll get over such as these right quick.

The damage shows more obvious like in the dining area – Kaylee’s flowers looking a might worse for wear and the sun streaming through the window and straight to the floor as it hasn’t done in years. Her hands run over the back of a lone chair, and she moves it where it would go if the table were still there. The disinfectant smell so strong here it becomes a tang she can taste in the back of her throat, she swallows, trying to imagine mashed protein with too much rosemary instead.

Crew quarters pass in a blur of low light and a forward focus that ignores looking sideways. More bright sunlight pours into the bridge through windows so clean and new, she’s not sure the glass is in till she gets up the steps and into the area proper. Her eyes water a little due to the brightness as she looks out on this overly truthful planet, and some small part of her hopes for rain.

But her eyes adjust, and the pilot’s chair sits there in the unforgiving light. They’d cleaned it, the Alliance types, cleaned it so well there weren’t stains, not even the one from when he’d spilled coffee all over the left front corner. Zoe touches the now pristine cloth of the

Comments
Wednesday, 29 October 2008 03:09
I almost started crying. Very well done.
Wednesday, 29 October 2008 03:27
This sounds so much like Zoe, hanging on by having work to focus on and do. Great job of recreating the feeling of what the ship was like in the aftermath of so much death. Loved the line about the planet being too truthful.
Wednesday, 29 October 2008 08:36
Very poignant. " ... and some small part of her hopes for rain." It does, and they keep flyin'.
UBIQUIRK
Thursday, 30 October 2008 22:54
Thanks everyone! It's great to hear that it was touching and in-character for Zoe!
Saturday, 01 November 2008 07:15
You bet! Made me cry and my friend was luaghing at me but that's ok 'cause this story portrayed Zoe's feelings perfectly!

Keep flying ;)

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