Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Cold, Cold, Warm

Tuesday, December 2, 2008

River takes Jayne's hat, and getting it back's not simple. Set soon after "The Message." Mix of humor and drama.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1919    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Gorramit, crazy, give that back!” Jayne lunges across the empty dining table, sending a lone tin cup clattering.

Dancing out of reach, River uses both hands to pull the bright orange hat lower on her head. “She would be warm.”

“You’ll be a damn sight colder if I shove you out the airlock.” He starts inching around the table. “Now give me what’s mine.”

“Not that kind of cold.” River rolls her eyes. “The more important kind – the inside kind. Cold of eyes and cold of heart …” Staring off into some other space, she shivers.

“Hell, girl, if you’re so all fired up about being cold, put boots on like sensible folk.” He dives towards her again, his foot tangling in a chair’s legs so that he stumbles. “Fei-fei de pi-yan!

River’s legs swirl in her flowing skirt as she runs out of the hatch, two orange tassels flowing behind her with her hair.

Jayne follows, a bellowing, stomping monster of old tales eluded by a laughing sprite who taunts by staying just out of reach.

Pretending to head for the engine room, she sidesteps down the back staircase, bare feet making scarcely a sound. Throwing glances over her shoulder, she leads on toward the cargo bay, skittering through the common room as Jayne yells, “Gou huang tang! I don’t care if you are feng le.”

The catwalk clangs with the pounding of his boots as he chases her around and around and up and down the stairs of the large space.

After multiple circuits, Jayne gives up shouting, puffing heavily, and even River’s laughter has become fairy-faint with breathlessness.

He slumps onto the stairs, leaning forwards, arms on knees.

River returns to sit a few steps below, turned sideways to half face him.

Their breathing eventually calms to quietness.

Gesturing toward her with one hand, Jayne says, “My mama made me that hat.”

“I know.” All playfulness gone from her face, River pulls it from her head and lowers it to her lap, eyes transfixed upon the orange handiwork. “She used to sing me lullabies

Comments
Wednesday, 03 December 2008 04:03
GAH! So cute! Made me smile at the end of a very long day so thank you very much!
Wednesday, 03 December 2008 13:07
This started out cute, but ended so much more tender. Lovely.
Wednesday, 03 December 2008 14:18
Perfect!!!
Wednesday, 03 December 2008 15:22
Nice piece. You caught the tone of both characters beautifly. When I can close my eyes and see a scene in my mind's eye I know it is right. So poignant.




Wednesday, 03 December 2008 15:28
Steams her eyes open with a cup of tea and corrects her spelling.....

BEAUTIFULLY

Sorry folks
UBIQUIRK
Tuesday, 09 December 2008 23:23
Thanks, everyone!

Gilove2dance - I'm glad it made you smile.

Jane0904 - It's great to hear that the change in tone worked for you.

Angellemarcs - I'm happy you liked it.

twilightseeker - I'm so glad you found them in-character.

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