Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

A History of FIre

Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Fire marks Mal’s life in beautiful and horrible ways. Written for general_firefly on lj. Winner SOTHAwards Best Mal Fic (thanks!).

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1783    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal lies still in his bunk, brow smooth, mouth relaxed and open.

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Mal pauses Blaze on the gentle hill above the house with a “whoa” and a pat to the neck, barely needing to pull on the reigns. Turning her, he looks over the ranch’s western field, hay a golden orange under a setting sun that shoots a swath of red across the sky.

“Sure is pretty,” he tells the pony, looking up. “Teacher says it’s something special in the atmosphere what does it.”

After long moments, Blaze snorts and shakes her head, pawing at the earth in front of her.

“‘Kay, girl, ‘kay. We’ll go an’ get you those oats in just a bit. You know I never miss eyeing this if I can help it.” Mal pats her neck again, rubbing along the warm flesh till she nickers.

Leaning forward slightly, he watches the sky turn to the ever deeper shades of scarlet and crimson. “Just one thing teacher never ‘splained so well, mayhap ‘cause I only got three years of learning so far. How come it’s called Shadow when it burns with the prettiest fire of all creation?”

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Legs twitching slightly, Mal lets out a huff of breath before his lips close into a tight line.

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“Malcolm Reynolds, you get yourself over here now!” His ma yells.

Head hanging, shoulders hunched, he moves towards her slowly, looking smaller than his fifteen years.

“What in tarnation’s got into you, boy?” Eyes narrowed, she points at him. “‘Splain yourself.”

“Me and Timmy, we was smoking …”

“In old Mr. Robert’s corncrib.”

He nods before continuing. “Then, well … then, we went to meet Rufus down the crick, so’s he could show us his new gun …”

“You just went off to have your fun and never did make sure that there tobacco was put out when you left, did you, boy?” The edges of her mouth draw down as her lips purse in a grimace.

His head shake is small and slow, his fingers twist around each other behind his back.

“I mean to tell you, I ain’t never seen the like – never!” she says, throwing her hands in the air. “Why, to think that a

Comments
Wednesday, 22 October 2008 00:07
Wow! This is so sad. So wretched. It really brings home the devastating loss Mal suffered. Even more than losing the war, he lost his home - the reason he fought in the first place. Or so I think.

Great fic. Thanks for sharing.
Wednesday, 22 October 2008 00:38
Beautiful descriptions of Shadow and Mal.
Wednesday, 22 October 2008 07:45
Excellent. Going from beauty to devastation in just a few paragraphs, all tied together with colours ... thank you.
Wednesday, 22 October 2008 12:41
So sad and so terribly beautiful in so few words. No wonder Mal is so destroyed inside. Very few people can relate to having their entire world destroyed metaphorically or physically.
UBIQUIRK
Thursday, 23 October 2008 22:52
Thanks everyone! I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed the story and thought it captured some of what Mal must have gone through losing Shadow!

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