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Taking Up Arms – Part 3 of 3

Monday, August 18, 2008


Jayne and Kaylee set out to establish a new life together when Mal joins the Rebellion that follows the Miranda announcement. The big man must reconsider his solemn vow to Kaylee to hang up his guns when Alliance raiders hit the rim world of Ezra.

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Title: Taking Up Arms – Part 3 of 3

Author: hisgoodgirl

Rating: PG-15 for Adult language, violence

Characters/Pairing: Crew, ofc, omc. Jayne/Kaylee, minor references to Mal/Simon.

Timeline: One year post BDM; seven years later.

Disclaimer: All belong to Joss. I got nada.

Word Count, Part Three: 3,335

A/N; During the American Civil War, a group of soldiers-turned-outlaws called Quantrell’s Raiders terrorized the Kansas-Missouri area. This story was inspired in part by their impact on the settlers of that region. Originally written for the Summer_of_Jaylee community at LiveJournal with the prompts ‘sun’ and ‘water’. If you read and enjoy this story, please take just a minute to let me know. Hover for translation.

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Taking Up Arms

Part Three

Jayne was carefully making his way up a dry gulch toward the rocky overhang where he anticipated being able to get a glimpse of the situation below. He wasn’t sure what he might see, but every hunch he had was telling him the bastards who took his girls would be holdin’ 'em there. The narrow trail petered out, leaving him with a flat face of rock to traverse. His keen eyes scanned the rock face for any grooves or handholds. Satisfied he had a route he could work with, he slipped his rifle strap over his head and shoulder and balanced the weapon against his back. He hated heights, always had, but this was the only way he knew to reach where he needed to go. As he turned to begin the tenuous journey across, he thought he heard soft movement behind him. Was it a lizard scuttling on the rock or someone following him?

Slinging the rifle into firing position, he spun quickly, only to have the barrel halted in its arc by an iron-hard grasp. If the late Shepherd Book himself had appeared on the trail before him, Jayne could have been no less surprised. Before him stood River Tam. His jaw dropped open and his expression was one of utter bewilderment.

Comments
Tuesday, 19 August 2008 08:23
Good story! Surprisingly little action in the rescue, but I like that Jayne didn't have to break his vow. Maybe that's what he meant about not being able to make that shot, because we all know he could take the eye out of a flea at a hundred yards.
Tuesday, 19 August 2008 12:11
I really loved that Mal, Zoe and River were able to come to the rescue though right up until that last bit I thought Jayne and Kaylee were going to ask to come back to Serenity with their daughter. While I understand their decision I'm all kinds of sorry they aren't. As for Jayne giving Mal his best gun and Kaylee the biggest slice of cake, what better thanks could a man ask for? I am also assuming that in the rescue Mal and Co took out the other members of Briggs nasty crew as there is no mention of them being tied up ready to be taken back for justice. It feels as if it needs another chapter to tie up those ends but really enjoyed it anyway. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 19 August 2008 15:39
A big old softie, our Jayne.

For whatever reason, I picture grown River looking Lara Croft-esque.

Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to your next story, which hopefully won't get bumped off the front page as quickly as this one did.
Wednesday, 24 August 2011 19:19
Yep, Mal will take good care of Vera. Even if he does seem to have some trouble lifting her... ;)
10 Thumbs up!!

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