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Monster May I

Monday, August 11, 2008

part 48...it has been a very fun and fast few weeks so forgive me for the long wait between chapts...thanks all for the support and a special thanks to Upperson for your sweet note wondering how I was...It made my day....anyway, Cat meets Monster

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Monster May I

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based on the World of Firefly by Joss Whedon

She had only seen her partner one other time as the monster before her and Cat firmly decided that one time had been more than enough. Red eyes, more bloodshot than anything, looked at her with the lust of five men and four hungry zombies. He wanted to rape her and then eat her, which wouldn't have been so bad, but she kind of had a promise to keep.

The Reaver circled her, looking at her as if she were a t-bone wearing a black Teddie, which made her grip the brown coat even firmer around her body. His voice cracked, sounding as though he swallowed gravel. "Smell familiar.”

“You bet I do. Last time, though, there were kids involved. This time, not so much.” Her beast growled inside of her, though she was unsure if the serum would cause it to stay dormant or not. A lend of a little of its power would be a great help.

“This time I will enjoy watching you scream and then I will take your eyes while you still breathe. Trophy.”

“Who would have thought Reavers were so articulate?”

“I still have full use of my tongue, but not for long. First, I will dispose of you and then finish what you stopped me from long ago.”

“You can't have him.” She growled. “You may be part of him now, but to hell, if I am going to let you rule.”

“Don't think it's your choice, Babe.” The creature had dug deep for that comment, mimicking her partner's voice, though with a hiss at the end. Her beast stirred beneath the skin, her fangs rubbing at her bottom lip, but Cat subdued it. If she allowed both of them to battle, neither would make it out alive and if one did, god knows what would happen to the crew after.

“Don't do that.” She whispered, a harsh sound filling his ears as he grinned. He had found her weakness.

“People say how stupid us, Reavers are. How we are just animals going after prey, but in essence, we are the ultimate predator. After all, even animals are known to be quite

Comments
Tuesday, 12 August 2008 01:59
Ah - the welcome visceral mix of laughs and shudders and, er, inventively violent kill-offs!:)
Tuesday, 12 August 2008 07:58
Lots of tension in this one and great to have you back writing. One thing, did you mean to repeat a couple of sections? It is disconcerting and I wasn't sure if you were aiming for an effect or if it was an error. Keep Flyin', Ali D L:~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 12 August 2008 08:59
If I suffer a heart attack... the doctor's bill's on ya *winks* Well done!

Keep flying ;)
Tuesday, 12 August 2008 12:10
Apart from the slight problem with repeat of a couple of sections, really good stuff!
Tuesday, 12 August 2008 12:53
Awesome little story Angelle I’m thinking the flashback are alternative angles of the story or maybe different points of view as seen by a character. Anyhoo I really like the way you have the mixture of interaction along with individual thought in your stories. Gives us so much depth to the people.

Glad to have you back writing, Z
Thursday, 14 August 2008 02:17
Ack! Don't kill off my friend, or my opponent, whichever we're labeling them as at the moment. Lol. Great job ange. keep up the awesome work.
Sunday, 17 August 2008 00:55
It was worth waiting for. I love it when you go for the literal and proverbially guts. I'mm off to read the next chapter. Kick ass, woman!
Sunday, 17 August 2008 08:38
You're back!! And there are two chapters up! Yippee. this was really good, creepy and violent but still some humour. Thx for the mention - and don't mention it!! LOL

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