Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Still Small Voice

Thursday, June 12, 2008

part 41...thanks to all of you wonderful people...some of the best I know...only loan here would be 'Ski and I thank him always for the use....please support your local fanfic writer and read some of my riders' works, they so rock....anyways...Cat finds life...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3514    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Still Small Voice

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based on the world of Firefly by Joss Whedon

Dawn had come as the once silent sun crested over top the murky colored planet below. She stirred next to her lover, knowing full well they were here and here was where she did not want to be. His breath stirred her neck as Mal's lips brushed softly uopn her skin, but it did little to help the nerves that just would not be silent. Something was hunting her, seeking her and that something wanted everyone, but Cat on this ship to die.

A soft voice played with the light of her mind, a still voice, not bogged down by hatred of malice, but by a want of something so desired that it would risk being found by whatever was coming than stay hidden in the safety of the dark. 'Help me please.'

Cat's eyes flew open for it was not a voice she knew, nor a voice that could have come from the ship, rather a voice that had been issued from the very depths and heart of the place they were venturing into. Her mind painted a picture as the voice continued to call, a small child no more than eleven sat in a corner of some small room calling to whoever could hear. She had been tampered with and that alone made Cat growl, alone made her long fangs emerged where they should be dormant.

Mal must have felt her grow restless because he spoke in her ear like soothing cool water on a sunburn, soft and gentle teasing the hair on her neck. "We'll get him, Boa Bei."

"There's something more. I don't know, but someone wants to be found and I think that someone is a child, Mal, a small child."

The captain rose slightly propped with an elbow. "Are you sure? Not some trap that no good Hun dan got in line for you."

She had told him everything after her talk with 'Ski, her partner reminding her again and again that she would be in good hands. Mal had taken the news about as well, swearing on any and every god listening that he would end the man that had caused her s

Comments
Thursday, 12 June 2008 15:57
like jane0904 your verse is becomin so well fleshed out that it's like watching a show from a parallel universe:)

the characters and relationships are developing very interestingly - and consistently.
Thursday, 12 June 2008 19:49
WELL. A little more of my captain than I needed to see, but enough to make the story what it needed to be. AMAZING as always. Keep it up, I need that healthy boost that I get from reading your stuff.
Thursday, 12 June 2008 23:58
It was good to have that flashback showing how Cat and Mal got together and their hopes for a better future. I'm worried about the child Cat senses, sounds like they have been doing to her what they did to River. There are some incredibly sick people in the 'verse and they need putting down. Can't wait for the next part! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 13 June 2008 05:49
Wha? OK, perhaps I should stop checking for these at the office. it could get a little embarassing! :) You weave an intricate tale! And now that we have all commented, you have to give us the next one! :)
Friday, 13 June 2008 12:23
I'm glad you had Cat's and Mal's first coupling as something urgent, something needed. It was a nice contrast to the first section. But a child? Would it be beyond the realms of possibility that this child is actually Cat's somehow?

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