Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Edge of a Petal

Thursday, April 10, 2008

Rating: Squeaky clean <br>
Paring: Mal/Inara <br>
Setting: Pre-series. Months before the Firefly
pilot. <br>

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3178    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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It is at the edge of a petal that love waits. - William Carlos Williams

She smelled them before they ever arrived at her shuttle door, their fragrance sparking a thousand memories that flashed through her mind in three seconds: spring, the House gardens, the Louyang Peony Festival, dancing with flowers pinned in her hair, lanterns, dragons, fireworks - Sihnon ablaze with light and color and music and laughter.

Curiosity almost had her jumping to her feet to investigate but Companion training wasn’t shed just because one chose to work on a disreputable cargo ship.

Zoë, the second in command, had mentioned in one of Serenity’s impromptu, around-the-supper-table meetings that they needed to stock up when they landed on a planet that had the ability to grow them. Something about harvesting the bulbs for a vaguely mysterious home remedy.

Serenity’s captain walked in without knocking, an alarming habit he’d formed of late, his arms full of the huge blooms on sturdy stems, defensive casualness draped all over him.

“Brought you some of those flowers you set such store by. Was gonna throw 'em away, but seem to recall you likin' the smell or some such thing.”

She opened her mouth to berate his appalling lack of manners, but on seeing what he cradled in his arms she sprang up instead to bury her nose in the large blossom that he held out to her.

Pinks. Reds. Whites. Heaven. Her favorites. He remembered that she loved peonies? It had been months since the layover when she’d found some wilted specimens at a market stall: she’d laughed with delight and bought them just the same. Had he been watching? The thought gave her a small, illicit thrill that she completely ignored.

He smiled a little when he thought she couldn’t see him, seemingly pleased at her reaction, which charmed her in a convoluted way. When she made a show of looking up he was stern again - all manner of couldn’t-care-less. It was an odd little dance they’d recently begun to perform.

“You don’t want or need ‘em - just pi

Comments
Thursday, 10 April 2008 23:04
Yes, I would ignore that stupid little voice of warning as well - what does it know? Nothing. Loved this. Nicely balanced between the two, love how the dance they have been playing is becoming softer, more subtle and real. Especially liked Inara's instrospection about going carefully so as not to frighten the Captain off. Reminds me of that saying, "Softly, softly catchee monkey" - and Captains too or so it seems. Hope there will be more, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 11 April 2008 01:44
Fabulous little fluffy piece, so much in line with early Firefly. Love your beautiful writing and always look forward to more Mal/Inara. Loved the reference to Inara's hands and Mal's faraway look. Sigh.
Friday, 11 April 2008 12:55
Hey...
It was posting day and no one told me? (Of course, I'd have to be around for someone to tell me, wouldn't I?)
I love this moment in time and what you do with it - so very much conveyed in body language, small movements. I love Inara noticing Mal smiling when he thinks she can't see, and how she plays to confirm it.

Why she cared? Poor woman, how couldn't she? She's caught good and proper.
Saturday, 12 April 2008 07:14
Oh, anjulie.

This was lovely. So romantic, so subtle and filled with beautiful imagery and excellent character voice.

*happy sigh*

Perfect. Just. Perfect.
Saturday, 12 April 2008 07:21
P.S. Write more fic, please! =D
Saturday, 12 April 2008 14:05
Thank you all for the sweet feedback.

EmpireX, I'm writing the Slower Path Series with browncoat_2x2 and here's a link to our Sushi comm on LJ. We'd love to have you join.

http://community.livejournal.com/sushi_fic/profile
Thursday, 22 May 2008 16:03
liked it liked it liked it liked it liked it liked it liked it liked it liked it liked it!:)

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