Zöe knocked once on his hatch and pushed it open.
“You decent, sir?”
“Mostly,” came the muffled response. “Jin lai.”
She stepped down a few rungs and then dropped lightly to the floor.
Mal stood at his sink, shaving. He was dressed from the waist down, with his suspenders hanging loosely around his hips.
“Zao hao.”
His eyes met hers in the mirror and asked the question in the way they had.
She tossed the leather pouch full of coin onto his desk in answer, and dropped down on his bunk.
“Didn’t have a speck of trouble. You were right ‘bout the fair bein’ a good cover. They got another job. Told ‘em we’d talk and let ‘em know before we left.”
He nodded, concentrating on his task.
“Quiet job’d be nice. Jayne?”
“Behaved. Watched over River.” She glanced around his bunk, wondering if anything ever changed. Mal’s bunk was the only place they could really be themselves, and when she was down here with him it was just like old times. There were no prying eyes here, trying to figure out their relationship, trying to decipher their short code.
Wash had called it twin-speak, telling her about twins who had their own language. ‘Are you sure you and Mal aren’t twins separated at birth?’ he’d ask, almost seriously. Wash had found their codependency, as he called it, disturbing. He’d make the comment that people never got him and Zöe, and her eyes would meet Mal’s. Ai ya! What would they think about them?
“Simon and Kaylee?”
She made a noncommittal sound down in her throat that had him frowning at his reflection.
“Huh.”
“Need to spend some time in town today; wash some clothes, go by the tannery – stitchin’ on my gunbelt’s worked loose down the outside - and I need a new shower cap. Jayne stole mine.”
His eyes asked the question.
“Didn’t even want to know.”
“Got a few things to do my own self, then we’ll meet up and see them boys about that job.”
He finished shaving and reached for his towel. His hand fell on a ba
CAROlYN*
You are a genius!!!
And... gotta love sushi! That fish should have been in the show from the beginning!
I agree. We should have had a Sushi. Kaylee would have talkd to him. Simon would research him to see if he carried germs. Jayne would have tried to eat him. Book would have used him in a sermon about the loaves and fishes. Wash would have bought him a little fish-sized dinosaur for his bowl. Mal and Zoe would probably have just rolled their eyes.
You can't take the sky from me
And more of the other people in the story, too, just to be clear about it.
By the way, the plate and chopsticks are to decorate the bottom of the big damn goldfish bowl. It fits, given the name.
I really don't know if there will be any more of the story; but if there is I'll post it here.
The more I think about this,the funnier it gets. I don't think they'd start out with these decorations, but it would make a great prank on the ship to put a plate and chopsticks in the fish tank. :-)
Cute.
What's a BCS Panther??
I really don't know if there will be any more of the story,but if there is I'll post it here.
help!
Please write more - you seem to understand the basis of their loyalty and commitment better than anyone. And yes I do believe you can have loyalty and commitment to another human being without having it be codependency.
~kaynara
You've written the best Mal and Zoe I have ever read - and I've read a lot!
Thank you very much. That is very encouraging. I don't know if I'll be writing much more, but I'll pos if here if I do.
I am hoping she'll pick up another chapter, just to see what she'd do with it.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Capercaillie
Keep it up, you two (by two)...
Anjulie (and 2x2), I salute ya!
BEB
I loved this - you have captured the character's voices perfectly.
cant wait for future installments.
"My hand to God"
wow, thanks!!
Have I ever told you how effing amazing your Zoe is? You're my all time favourite Zoe ever, darlin'. You just have her, so brilliant.
Love this. More than ever!
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