Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Sometimes It Takes a Gun to the Head

Sunday, May 14, 2006

Rating: G

Pairing: Zoe and Mal Mal/Inara implied


A/N: This is part three to A Cargo Smuggler, His Girl, and Her...Well, You'll See. It is set after the smuffly second part, So Much for Fantasies, written by browncoat_2x2 because I refuse to believe that Mal and Inara are NOT doing it.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3583    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Zöe knocked once on his hatch and pushed it open.

“You decent, sir?”

“Mostly,” came the muffled response. “Jin lai.”

She stepped down a few rungs and then dropped lightly to the floor.

Mal stood at his sink, shaving. He was dressed from the waist down, with his suspenders hanging loosely around his hips.

Zao hao.”

His eyes met hers in the mirror and asked the question in the way they had.

She tossed the leather pouch full of coin onto his desk in answer, and dropped down on his bunk.

“Didn’t have a speck of trouble. You were right ‘bout the fair bein’ a good cover. They got another job. Told ‘em we’d talk and let ‘em know before we left.”

He nodded, concentrating on his task.

“Quiet job’d be nice. Jayne?”

“Behaved. Watched over River.” She glanced around his bunk, wondering if anything ever changed. Mal’s bunk was the only place they could really be themselves, and when she was down here with him it was just like old times. There were no prying eyes here, trying to figure out their relationship, trying to decipher their short code.

Wash had called it twin-speak, telling her about twins who had their own language. ‘Are you sure you and Mal aren’t twins separated at birth?’ he’d ask, almost seriously. Wash had found their codependency, as he called it, disturbing. He’d make the comment that people never got him and Zöe, and her eyes would meet Mal’s. Ai ya! What would they think about them?

“Simon and Kaylee?”

She made a noncommittal sound down in her throat that had him frowning at his reflection.

“Huh.”

“Need to spend some time in town today; wash some clothes, go by the tannery – stitchin’ on my gunbelt’s worked loose down the outside - and I need a new shower cap. Jayne stole mine.”

His eyes asked the question.

“Didn’t even want to know.”

“Got a few things to do my own self, then we’ll meet up and see them boys about that job.”

He finished shaving and reached for his towel. His hand fell on a ba

Comments
Sunday, 14 May 2006 14:12
That was AMAZING. You got the Zoe/Mal relationship down so well! I could see this happening. Keep up the good work. Will there be more?

CAROlYN*
Sunday, 14 May 2006 14:19
Thank you. I really don't know if there will be more, but if there is I'll post it here.
Sunday, 14 May 2006 14:27
“Buy her a big damn goldfish bowl, sir – and try not to call her a whore.”

You are a genius!!!

And... gotta love sushi! That fish should have been in the show from the beginning!
Sunday, 14 May 2006 14:31
Why thank you!!!

I agree. We should have had a Sushi. Kaylee would have talkd to him. Simon would research him to see if he carried germs. Jayne would have tried to eat him. Book would have used him in a sermon about the loaves and fishes. Wash would have bought him a little fish-sized dinosaur for his bowl. Mal and Zoe would probably have just rolled their eyes.
Sunday, 14 May 2006 16:01
You really do have the Mal/Zoe relationship perfect. These 3 fics togther are great!
Sunday, 14 May 2006 17:20
I'll take credit for two and thank you!

::waves to NC from TN::
Sunday, 14 May 2006 18:16
Loved, loved, LOVED this to itty bitty pieces! I like it how their shared history allows Zoe to get away with things no one else can and how Zoe isn't afraid to tell him harsh home truths if she thinks he might mess up a good thing otherwise. Always looking out for her Captain and friend, but also with an eye to the rest of the crew. This was brilliant! Bravo. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 14 May 2006 18:34
More Sushi, please. (holds out plate with chopsticks on it).

And more of the other people in the story, too, just to be clear about it.

By the way, the plate and chopsticks are to decorate the bottom of the big damn goldfish bowl. It fits, given the name.
Sunday, 14 May 2006 20:48
Plates and chopsticks are kinda scary when you're just a little fish. :-)

I really don't know if there will be any more of the story; but if there is I'll post it here.
Sunday, 14 May 2006 20:54
BCSPantherfan,

The more I think about this,the funnier it gets. I don't think they'd start out with these decorations, but it would make a great prank on the ship to put a plate and chopsticks in the fish tank. :-)


Cute.

What's a BCS Panther??
Sunday, 14 May 2006 21:15
Plates and chopsticks are kinda scary when you're just a little fish. :-)

I really don't know if there will be any more of the story,but if there is I'll post it here.
Sunday, 14 May 2006 21:18
::sigh:: I hate the format here. Is there a way to delete comments? I hit that one above twice.

help!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 14 May 2006 21:18
You've written the best Mal and Zoe I have ever read - and I've read a lot!
Please write more - you seem to understand the basis of their loyalty and commitment better than anyone. And yes I do believe you can have loyalty and commitment to another human being without having it be codependency.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 14 May 2006 21:21
oh, this was so perfect. loved zoe teasing mal--i can just see him being all young and embarrassed (and repressed) in the war. it's fun seeing how they are with eachother in private--the series and BDM only showed small amounts of that. you and 2x2 should keep this series going!! ;)

~kaynara
Sunday, 14 May 2006 21:41
Anonymous (69.179.167.139) Sunday, May 14, 2006 - 11:18

You've written the best Mal and Zoe I have ever read - and I've read a lot!


Thank you very much. That is very encouraging. I don't know if I'll be writing much more, but I'll pos if here if I do.
Sunday, 14 May 2006 21:42
you and 2x2 should keep this series going!! ;)


I am hoping she'll pick up another chapter, just to see what she'd do with it.

Glad you enjoyed it.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 15 May 2006 00:19
That was so much fun! Thank you very much! You nailed it - I really liked the interplay and twinspeak here.

Capercaillie
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 15 May 2006 05:14
I love Mal and Zoe's relationship, and I really enjoyed your handling of it here - especially the way you encorporated the whole of their relationship from early in the war, through to her loss of Wash, and on to talk of the future. All within the context of the Mal/Inara thing.

Keep it up, you two (by two)...
Wednesday, 17 May 2006 04:59
Now this is something that's been a long time coming! Zoe should have done a variation of this before Inara left the first time, and used basically the same argument (though adjust the 'do the same thing again' line concerning Wash to something more suitable) to get Mal to pull his head out of his ass;)

Anjulie (and 2x2), I salute ya!

BEB
Thursday, 18 May 2006 04:28
Shiny!!

I loved this - you have captured the character's voices perfectly.

cant wait for future installments.
Friday, 19 May 2006 20:05
Yay! Excellent wonderful perfect Mal/Zoe chat, and the sparring at the end is just too good!!

"My hand to God"

wow, thanks!!
Tuesday, 25 July 2006 21:58
That was brilliant! I'm so glad I found this place...
2X2
Friday, 18 December 2009 19:36
Rereading this, because you know that's what I do ;o)

Have I ever told you how effing amazing your Zoe is? You're my all time favourite Zoe ever, darlin'. You just have her, so brilliant.

Love this. More than ever!

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