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Presumption of Guilt – Chapter 8

Monday, March 17, 2008

Jayne Cobb awaits trial for rape and murder. When Zoe and Kaylee visit the merc to cheer him up, things in Silverton come to a boil as a lynch mob gathers.

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Title: Presumption of Guilt – Chapter 8

Author: hisgoodgirl

Disclaimer: All belongs to Joss. I got nada but my imagination.

Characters: Crew, omc, ofc.

Warning: PG for graphic violence, profanity and other grownup things.

Setting: In the town of Silverton, on Santo, immediately prior to “The Train Job”.

Words: 2,075

A/N: As a kid, my two favorite TV genres were westerns and detective shows. I finally decided to tackle both in a mix I’ve thought of as “Firefly CSI”. Click my name to access the previous chapters. If you’re following this tale, I’d really appreciate hearing what you think. Remember, feedback is what writers (and muses) live for. And if you’re enjoying this, please pimp it to your friends. Thanks!

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Presumption of Guilt

Chapter Eight

“Ma’am, I need you and your friend to come out right now.” The young deputy facing Zoe was tense and wide-eyed. Zoe could hear the fear in his voice. “Looks like we got a batch a folks intent on havin’ themselves a lynchin’!”

“Kay-lee?” Zoe’s rising call echoed through the lockup. “Up here – now!”

Jayne pressed against the cell bars, his blue eyes wide. “I wish the ruttin’ hell I had my gun,” he cursed to himself, then told the mechanic, “You stick with Zo, you hear? She’ll keep ya safe! And Kaylee… thanks.”

The urgency in Zoe’s voice left no room for delay. With one anxious backward glance at Jayne, the girl turned and ran the length of the cell aisle. “Oh God, Zoe, what’re we gonna do?” she blurted.

The deputy pushed the two women ahead of him through the pass-through door, locking it behind them. Once the three of them were in the office, he dropped the ward-bar across the wide door that opened in from the street. “Sheriff Garvey’ll be here shortly. One of the other men went to get him,” he informed them. “You,” he waved at Zoe, “help me git these shutters bolted, so we can at least slow ‘

Comments
Monday, 17 March 2008 18:05
I'm beginning to like Sheriff Garvey. He might have been in his job a long while, and let some things slide, but this is pulling him up, and he's going to do the right thing. Of course, if the trial goes the wrong way, the right thing will be to hang Jayne, but that isn't going to happen. Is it. That's not a question!
Monday, 17 March 2008 21:38
I read Garvey as an essentially good man who has been ground down by having to work with Murchison's corruption over his head. His thing with alcohol is an expression of the sense of powerlessness and dispair he's had to deal with.

Seems like his interaction with Mal has helped his re-connect with his core values - one Browncoat to another, ya know? And I think there are a number of folks in Silverton who are pretty fed up with a certain overbearing banker.

Thanks for your comments!
Tuesday, 18 March 2008 02:12
*Phew* That was a close one, I was really scared Garvey wasn't going to able to calm them all.
Good for him.
Tuesday, 18 March 2008 08:49
Gee, you know how to give me heart attacks don't you? *grins* I really liked this, me want more!!

Keep flying ;)
Tuesday, 23 August 2011 19:11
Sherrif reminds me a little of Dean Martin's role in Rio Bravo. Proved he was stronger than the drink when he really had to be. Thumbs up for this character.

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