Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Because he loved her - the long promised fic ;)

Sunday, March 16, 2008

Yep, remember that beta-d fic I promised not so long ago? It's here! A HUUUUGE 'THANK YOU' for Desertgirl for being my patient beta reader, she rocks! Now...on to the story :)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3178    RATING: 7.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inara found herself in a bar – again. Bars weren’t exactly her favorite place but sometimes one could even get relaxed in these places. The air was heavy with smoke and the air smelled of alcohol and beer. Men were talking or betting money on a card game and some were playing billiards. Laughing when winning, cursing when loosing.

Inara didn’t even know how Mal managed to drag her to another one of these crappy bars trying not to focus on how this man was capable of getting into her skin. Every thing is too complicated 2 months since Miranda. Inara took a sip of her drink. Perhaps she should give everyone and everything some time to heal from all the pain they’ve been through, especially Zoe. But her relationship with Mal was getting better. They had avoided bickering for a while. He had even made her smile. She thought, watching the twirling liquid in her glass.

“Inara Serra?” asked a haunting, thick voice from behind her.

“Dalton Joan?” she managed. He looked so the same and yet so different. He was much taller than when she last saw him as a twelve-year- old boy and quite handsome, though in Inara’s opinion, not as handsome as Mal. Dalton’s blond hair cut in the latest fashion, attractive over all. Inara couldn’t believe her neighbor would change like this.

“How are you? Long time, no see!” He laughed as he hugged her.

Yep! This was Dalton Joan, the boy down the street who used to play hide and seek with her and push her on the swing as their mothers talked in the park. He was one of her closest friends until she took off to be a companion, she loved him like a brother she never had. At school he used to lure her into a prank and never let anyone pull her pigtails.

“I’m fine,” Inara set her drink on the table in front of her and looked into the man’s weathered eyes. “I haven’t seen you in years! How are you fairing? Still doing business?”

“Definitely, I wouldn’t dream of leaving the ‘Joan’s’. It’s stressful but life is good right now.” He said smiling, his green eyes ogling. “And how’

Comments
Sunday, 16 March 2008 12:55
Yes, I remember the trailer for this.

I like it so far, despite the... events. I'm so very glad Mal interviened before anything to horrible happened.
And I hope that Dalton suffered unimaginable pain.

Looking forward to the next part :)
MNEMOSYNE13
Sunday, 16 March 2008 19:25
This is rife with angst!

And I am quite enjoying it, especially since Mal got there in time! But what's going to happen?! Do pray tell!
Sunday, 16 March 2008 23:17
This is confusing. If Inara senses Dalton is thinking of her as a 'ten penny whore' why in the nine hells would she go anywhere with the creep? Also, Mal doesn't like him and his instincts are screaming that the man is no good so he lets her go off with him? Nope, don't see this scenario happening at all. Inara isn't stupid and the reason Dalton gives to get her to go back to his place would just set every alarm bell off in my head. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 17 March 2008 07:03
Thanks for all the comments guys!

Now Ali, it was Mal who saw the ten penny whore look and Inara would thrust Dalton because he's an old friend and they used to be very close to each other. Mal doesn't have any say on where or with whom Inara goes so he just tries to warn her with a look as she left the bar. As for the reason Dalton gives Inara for going to his place, that's just because in my opinion, Inara seemed to have quite some adventure with him when they were kids so there's some curiosity too about what might that capture show.

I hope I answered at least some of your questions and thanks for letting me know what you think, I appreciate neg comments as much as pos ones :)

Keep flying ;)
Monday, 17 March 2008 09:19
Thanks for explaining, I got a bit confused there for a minute especially as Inara is usually so quick on the uptake when anything isn't quite right. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 17 March 2008 10:49
woah - a harder style from you kimber, brave and interesting:)

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