Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Sun after Storms - Part 1

Wednesday, September 17, 2008

This takes place about 3 months after 'Because he loved her' and I promised before, this time I'll focus more on Mal's family so watch out for that as we go along =) Oh, and don't forget to tell me if you like this start!!

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Mal and Inara’s relationship was blossoming like a rose. They still bickered over stupid things but at least he no longer called her ‘whore’ and she didn’t call him ‘petty thief.’ Their affair was quite discreet at first, with stolen kisses at Louise’s house. Then it continued on the ship, often when they’re washing dishes in the galley or happened to be alone in a hallway. Followed by love notes appearing mysteriously in random hiding places. Despite Kaylee’s urge to squeal every time she saw them makes big eyes at each other at dinner, the crew decided to avoid bursting their bubble.

For Mal and Inara those stolen moments were promises of sweet dreams to come. When they slept, every kiss was a pledge of a never ending love. River obviously knew; but never said anything because even she noticed how Inara’s smile shone and that there was a new hop in Mal’s step. River also noticed how miserable Mal looked when he and Inara bickered, especially when Inara’s feelings so obviously had been crushed like glass by his careless words.

But today Mal had decided that the games would stop. He and Inara could no longer try to hide what they felt for each other anymore.

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Mal smiled up at the beautiful woman who had become as important as air for him, she was sleeping on top of him as usual and her weight was like that of a comfortable thick blanket. Over the past 3 months, he had come to really know her and the more he learned about her the more he was sure she was his better half. She was beautiful, intelligent, loyal, brave and her heart was as big as the universe. It had not taken him long to learn that she loved chocolate and cuddling; and that every time they made love, the day would turn out just shiny. It constantly amazed Mal how much love a person could give and be given. He loved Inara more than life and at the same time he knew she loved him the same way. He also knew that everyone on the crew could tell she loved them like her real family.

The pair were now on ho

Comments
Wednesday, 17 September 2008 14:40
Great start here. I would love to know more about Mal's family and I am ready to go on this adventure with you.
Wednesday, 17 September 2008 14:46
"I’m not River Mal, I don’t read minds; but I know you well enough to know when you’re being thoughtful.”

great line

River certainly has the advantage, doesn't she?

good to see you writing again
Wednesday, 17 September 2008 21:39
That's weird. Inara grew up on Shadow? Just can't see that. I always imagine Zoe maybe having a connection to Shadow as well but Inara is light years away from their background even if she was raised as a Companion on Shadow as you seem to infer. Just cannot see her getting her training on anything but a core world. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 18 September 2008 03:02
Your writing is really coming along nicely. Well done! It's always good to see happy Mal and Inara.

Glad you're back!
Thursday, 18 September 2008 05:53
Thank you all people! I'm glad you're enjoying the ride, this was just the start... I hope you enjoy the rest of it =) I wish to explain something AliD brought up...Inara wasn't raised on Shadow - much less got her training, she got that on Sihnon. I explained this in chapter 5 or 6 of 'Because he loved her' Inara was put in foster care for sometime, she was living with a friend of her uncle's who was a retired core teacher who was living on Shadow at the time.

Keep flying ;)
Friday, 19 September 2008 07:03
I love that they knew each other back then. It's original and adorable.
Friday, 19 September 2008 17:51
I liked this. it really is a great beginning.

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