Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Not Forgiving - Chapter 13

Saturday, March 15, 2008

This is what happens when the Alliance strikes back. The scenes in this chapter happen about three months later. How is Inara? What is happening to River? Hope you like it.

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Three men stood in an observation room, looking through the window at River Tam during one of her training sessions. The first one used his blue-gloved hands to shuffle through her file. The second one also wore blue gloves. He was standing next to the lead physician on River’s case who was reporting on her progress.

“How is the subject progressing?”

“Remarkably well,” the doctor reported. “Even though we had to discontinue the surgical program.”

“Why was that?”

“We tried on three separate occasions to proceed with the original program, but each time, the subject’s vitals became unstable to the point of near death.”

“Why was that happening?”

“We haven’t been able to pinpoint the problem.”

“Hmmm…” Blue hand #2 mused. His tone was laced with cold disapproval.

The doctor felt increasingly uneasy talking to the blue-gloved agents. He quickly moved on to discussing their subsequent successes with River, in hopes of gaining their praise.

“Strangely, it hasn’t made a difference,” he continued. “Through behavior modification and drug therapy, we have made tremendous strides with the subject.”

“Tell us about them.”

“As you can see, her physical abilities are outstanding,” the doctor said as he pointed at River in the other room. She was locked in an intense battle with ten highly trained soldiers. The soldiers were not doing well. She had felled all but three of them. Two guards stood by the door leading out of the room, but were not engaged in the exercise.

“Excellent. And her psychic abilities?”

“Also progressing. I have some vids of her progress in the other room, if you would like to adjourn there to review them,” the doctor said as he motioned toward the room across the hall, taking a step towards it.

“We will view them soon. We would like to see this exercise completed first.”

“Of course,” the doctor acknowledged. He shifted his feet uncomfortably.

River was fighting the soldiers. She looked very convincing, but unknown to her captors, she was holdin

Comments
Saturday, 15 March 2008 23:49
Tell me you're not going to leave it hanging here like this...ok, I guess that's what cliffhangers are for. Loved the suspense about what's to come and loved the games River is playing. So many times she is depicted as brain damaged, but brain altered and gifted is more how she was after Miranda. Who is the man nearby River? Hurry up and finish!
XARLEM
Sunday, 16 March 2008 19:21
Oh please say that you plan on posting the next part soon! You have the Joss Whedon season finale style cliffhanger down pat LOL. Loved the part with River; I had a feeling that they were under estimating her intentions. Can't wait til she really starts kicking some ass ;) Great job!
Sunday, 16 March 2008 21:06
Please, please don't leave us hanging on the cliff too long! Fingers...slipping...need...next...installment...!
Friday, 23 May 2008 23:39
!!!!!!

You need to post the next part already!!!
Friday, 23 May 2008 23:40
I'm going into withdrawl... already.... post.... soon... please...

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