Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Not Forgiving - Chapter 08

Monday, February 25, 2008

This is what happens when the Alliance strikes back. This chapter: What else could possibly go wrong to make their lives even <b>more</b> interesting?

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A/N: Our crew’s Plan keeps unfolding. I hope you like it.


They were all on edge as the cargo bay doors were forced open.

“Everyone have their comms on?” Zoe asked as she visually checked with each of the remaining crew. They all nodded. “Good.”

They all waited as an eerie silence filled the cargo bay. Zoe thought it was the quietest she had ever heard in on Serenity, save for the night cycle. Then she saw the first of the soldiers come through. She knew she had to hide as long as she could. She needed to be the eyes of the crew. She adjusted the comm in her ear.

“Jayne, they’re coming through,” she said quietly.

“I see ‘em. Waitin’ for a few more to come out ‘fore shooting,” He answered. He looked down at Zoe. “You stay put long as you can. Don’t let them see you. We need you there as long as possible.”

She nodded and tightened her grip on her rifle.

The next few seconds were as if they were in slow motion. The Alliance soldiers creeped in a little at a time. The narrow airlock door didn’t allow them to rush in as a large group. It effectively served to bottle neck their entry. Once Jayne saw enough soldiers, he open fired. At least four soldiers were killed and another three gravely injured. The soldiers in the rear fell back through the airlock, dragging many of their fallen comrades with them.

“Rutting hún dàns (bastards),” she heard Jayne mutter.

After a couple of minutes, the soldiers cautiously started to come back through the airlock.

“They’re coming back, Jayne,” Zoe warned. She turned and looked up at Simon. “If they get past Jayne, it’s your turn.”

“I’m ready,” Simon said, sounding less than sure.

Zoe smiled a bit. Simon reminded her of some of the new recruits during the war. All brave on the surface but shaking like a leaf underneath. That was a good thing though. Over confident recruits were usually prone to getting dead.

The soldiers inched forward. They were well aware of Jayne’s general position so they were taki

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XARLEM
Monday, 25 February 2008 19:43
Never posted a review here before; I've pretty much just lurked around for the last year or so. I've wanted to, as there are sooooo many great stories here, but I was always too lazy to take two minutes to register. So you should feel pretty special that I finally did so, just so I could tell you how excited I get everytime I see a new chapter of this fic posted :) I must have checked back here ten times today before this was put up.
I love how you manage to write a little something for every single character, and not a one is OOC. Shiny job!! I can't wait to see where you take us with this adventure!
-Kristie
Friday, 23 May 2008 23:14
Really, really good. I could see this having been written by Joss himself. ^_^

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