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The Slower Path: The Companion's New Clothes - Part 5 - Sequel to Brown Paper Packages

Sunday, March 2, 2008

Inara finally gets a chance to examine her new clothes.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3808    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Sunday, 02 March 2008 17:10
Yay! I really wanted to see Inara opening the parcel, I could almost see her biting her lip as she saw the clothes. The fact that they were special to her just because Mal gave them to her made me grin so wide I could eat a banana sideways - LOL! Hope to see the next part soon =)

Keep flying ;)
Sunday, 02 March 2008 18:15
This was delightful, and full of meaning in so many ways. Glad she was able to see the value of the gifts and appreciate the effort it took. You guys go as slow as you like - this is wonderful!
Sunday, 02 March 2008 19:21
well written, will be waiting for next episode
Sunday, 02 March 2008 20:33
I am really pleased that Inara waited until Kaylee left her at last alone before trying on the clothes. It made it feel like it meant more to her and now I can't wait for Mal's reaction when she steps out of her shuttle and he sees her wearing them for the first time! Lovely fic, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 03 March 2008 04:21
I have a feeling that a holster and pistol are coming soon. LOL

I love how slowly and naturally this is happening. And on we all hope to Mal's reaction.
Monday, 03 March 2008 12:19
i second the comments about how natural this piece feels. really enjoying this:)
Monday, 03 March 2008 19:10
I am smiling every time I finishe one of these chapters. The tone is right ,the tenderness exquisite. I can't wait to read them all.

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