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The Slower Path: The Basics - Part 3 - Sequel to Long Day

Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Mal and Zoe go shopping.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3741    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Wednesday, 27 February 2008 18:07
That was adorable. Sorry if that's not what you intended but I couldn't come up with a better, or more appropriate, word :-)
Wednesday, 27 February 2008 18:16
Aw! That *was* adorable. And funny! I'm gonna like this, I know it!

And I love it when Zoe teases Mal. Good times.
Wednesday, 27 February 2008 18:38
I can see Nathan and Gina playing this scene as you described it. LOL! This is great!
Wednesday, 27 February 2008 19:14
Can't wait to see Inara's face and how she decides to thank Mal. Wouldn't Zoe like to be a little fly on the wall for that conversation? (Me too!). Ali D :~)
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Wednesday, 27 February 2008 19:26
This is such a sweet situation...I am damn near speechless.
Thursday, 28 February 2008 02:11
Such a simple slice of life, but you two made it sparkle with a new life of its own. Glad Zoe could come alive to rib him about what he was doing. Looking forward to more!
Thursday, 28 February 2008 02:13
Adorable is the right word Megg. I can see this playing out on the screen too. I can just see Nathan's confused look and Gina's deadpan.LOL

Please let us know Inara's reaction.
Thursday, 28 February 2008 04:54
love the way you write Mal and Zoe, and neither one needs to mention her name, but they both know who they are talking about
Thursday, 28 February 2008 08:04
I might have a tooth ache later from all this sweetness! I loved Mal's reaction all along, I could immagine Zoe ribbing him all along *grins* I can't wait to see Inara's reaction when he gives them to her, especially the panties - I can see them blushing!!! Hope to see the next part soon =)

Greetings from St.Theresa Junior Lyceum (my school)

Keep flying ;)
Thursday, 28 February 2008 14:54
i love the naturalistic way you write:)
Friday, 29 February 2008 21:07
Another fun scene. I'm glad to see Zoe having fun, especially at Mal's expense. That's probably more healing for her than any heart to heart they could have.

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