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A Real Good Job

Saturday, February 23, 2008

Kaylee joins Serenity

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2635    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A REAL GOOD JOB

Up at Cody's camp I spent my days, oh,
With flat car riders and cross-tie walkers
Old Cody, Junior took me over
Said, "You're gonna find the world is smould'ring.
And if you get lost come on home to Green River

Mac Frye’s Repairs was more of a big shed than a shop but it was a roof that kept the rain and weather off while he worked on whatever it was folks needed fixing. Today it was a rundown little CAT 790 log loader. It’d been kept up real nice in the past but the guys running her now just didn’t know jack about maintenance, cleaning her out or giving the moving parts a good once over with a rag and a can of lube. Now there was some fiddly little problem with the transmission. He’d tried everything he could think of but as soon as he adjusted one thing, another went wrong. He growled with frustration, wishing his daughter were here. She’d have the thing up and running in no time. She knew machines, his little girl.

“Daddy?” Speak o’ the devil.

“What is it Kaylee?” He banged his head on the open hood as he straightened.

Kaywinnit smiled her big sunshiny smile and moved over to peer into the hovercraft. She grabbed a hydrospanner and adjusted a timing belt, then tightened a coolant line. “That should do ya.”

Mac went around and revved the engine. It purred with happiness, settling into a contented idle.

“That’s my Kay.” He shot his daughter a grin and shut it down. “So what ya need girl? That skinny little creepy kid been givin’ ya the eye again?”

“Nuthin’ like that, daddy.” She twisted her fingers together nervously. “There’s a man wants ta give me a job, a real good job.”

Mac swept his youngest daughter up in a bear hug, swinging her around. “That’s great Sunshine! Where ya gonna be workin’? It ain’t over at Al’s shop is it? Dunno if I can stand my little girl workin’ fer the competition.”

“No daddy, I ain’t workin’ fer Al. Ya know that little Firefly landed on the other side of camp?”

“’Course I do. Been there near a week now.” He

Comments
Saturday, 23 February 2008 13:14
We all write Kaylee from a happy home, don't we? I suppose she'd never be that bright, cheery person otherwise. Good job!
Saturday, 23 February 2008 14:41
This was nice look at Kaylee and her family. Did they leave Bester there too?
Sunday, 24 February 2008 11:38
I'm sure I've read this before, or another fic so close to identical as to be its' twin. Loved it then, love it now. As for where they dumped Bester, does anyone care? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 24 February 2008 20:16
I really liked this, especially the way you incorporated so much detail about Kaylee's home, without beating us over the head with tired description. It was well thought out and worked into the story and character's thoughts very nicely.

I also liked the way you showed their view of the firefly as being such a fancy vessel. It reinforces Kaylee's constant offense at others' view of Serenity as junk, and adds to the depth of such insults as not only disparaging a beautiful machine, but her whole family and home.

Thanks for sharing.


Oh, and one minor note: I believe it's spelled 'Frye', with an 'e'.

Tuesday, 26 February 2008 01:43
This was really heartwarming..great family descriptions, dialoge is wonderful..great work!

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