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Here Be Dragons (Part XX)

Thursday, September 2, 2004

River gets ambitious

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5420    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer – Everything either does belong to Joss or it should. I’m just borrowing his shiny ‘verse for a while.

The 21st Lancers belong to the British Army so I’m borrowing them too. I hope they don’t mind.

Thanks to my regular readers for making it worthwhile to continue the story and special thanks to my Proof-Reader Landry.

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Serenity/Granite Gorge – Drifting – 2520AD

‘You’ve got to be yanking our chains,’ Steve said simply. ‘I could buy a Task Force of a few Destroyers and Frigates but we just didn’t have the manufacturing capability to produce Super-Heavies by the end of the war.’

Doyle nodded. ‘Yes but they were both originally laid down in early zero-nine when we still did, barely. Most of the hull, engines and the primaries were completed then but then because priorities changed to purely defensive operations they stopped construction and the two were hauled off waiting to be broken up again for scrap. They were still around when they decided to form Task Force Omega which needed the firepower so we finished them,’ she smiled. ‘Half their armament was salvaged from old Alliance ships. Part of the armour of Scylla was actually metal taken from a passenger liner. We used everything we could get our hands on to get them battle-ready.’

‘Task force Omega? Good name, very… final,’ Steve commented.

Inara was somewhat mystified by the sundry awed expressions. ‘I’m sorry but why are you all making such an issue of this? There are Alliance Cruisers all over the place.’

‘Completely different animal,’ Wash answered. ‘Those brightly lit Ally Cruisers are there to look big, impressive and intimidating so from the keel up that’s what they’re designed to do. During the war they built ships to smash other ships, they were big, heavy, not even that impressive to look at really… and they’d pound anything afloat today to junk,’ he paused. ‘Let me put it this way. Ships we’ve run into like the IAV Agamemnon or the Dortmunder carry weapons. Fifteen years ago they ma

Comments
Thursday, 02 September 2004 21:45
Yay, more story, and ooo, more AI ships! I'm thinkin' that they could cause a little trouble for our friend Shadow...
Thursday, 02 September 2004 23:40
Uh oh, bad things coming. Looks like River isn't going to be the only telepath doing the math. Very shiny story, so much gorram detail in it too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 03 September 2004 07:30
That wacky River. Do you think Mal would really go along with another war?

Keep flyin'
Friday, 03 September 2004 07:41
So... a fairly *ambitious* storyline you're going for here! ;-)

I see a big damn hole in River's notion of how to win the war, suspect you're already all over it (very exacting plotlines you create). Other than the AIs and MRs on the opposition side, that is. Fascinated to see how you play this all out.

Good story. Love the way you play in all the historical analogy and refs.
Saturday, 04 September 2004 16:25
Good stuff! This is my first read. Do you have any previous postings? Could you explain "IFF codes" to me?
Saturday, 04 September 2004 19:45
Oh, Severen....are you in for a treat...Hotpoint has scads of postings, prologues of this fic series...Another riveting installment, HP...God help those 'Blue Hand' hundan when River gets through with them... Anxiously awaiting next chapter
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 September 2004 23:01
dude!! this rocks im dyeing to know what happens when the AI's meet (im thinking big family reunion)

the browncoats really will rise again!
Thursday, 16 December 2004 16:49
Wonderful story, but , um... River would be their most important asset in any battle and on every planet, but she's only one girl. She can't be everywhere at once. Heck, she can't even work that well surounded by 1100 people, like, say, the crew of a battle cruiser. Nope, the brwoncoats need lots of telepaths, and a few more AIs wouldn't hurt, either.

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