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The Sachem: Chapter 7 Part I

Friday, February 1, 2008

Post BDM; M/I, S/K; Continued From New Haven: Stepping backwards into the past, we view what went on before Mal, Zoe and Simon were captured. In this chapter, River explains Mal's reason, Mal goes on a Meilin related errand, and something is unsettling to Jayne.

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Jayne had slept in till well into the noon.

After waking up, he had gone and taken a bath, then gotten a decent hair cut, shave and some fresh clothes. Mal had told him to spend just the basics, but then Mal didn't know that Jayne for some time had been winning and keeping money of his own. So the merc bought himself a rather nice new shirt and pants, and when he went to eat he ordered enough for two men, plus added a cigar and a shot of whiskey to the meal.

After stuffing himself with breakfast and lunch all in one sitting, the freshly bathed Jayne headed out to a small store he had heard word of mouth of. With the furs bundled on his shoulder, he crossed the street of the small town and entered the shop. Like half of the shops in Tehatchepi it was a leather goods shop; filled with chaps, coats, gloves, leads, hats and anything else that could be fashioned out of hide or fur. With large strides, Jayne went over to the counter and set his goods down with an itched growl. He was sore from lack of companionship, which was why he was up so early. If there had been a woman the merc turned cowboy probably wouldn't have left his tiny hotel room until the sun went down. Nonetheless, since he wasn't preoccupied, he decided to run the errands then spend the rest of his time at the saloon. Taking his hat off, then his orange knit piece and stuffing it in his back pocket, crude blue eyes scanned the business as the sound of footsteps came from the back.

"Good day." The shop keep greeted.

"Howdy." Jayne's deep voice replied, cigar clenched between his teeth. "Got some furs, wish ta trade."

"Well now, always like the site of trade. Name's Joseph Fezznik." Wiping his hands on his apron he thrust one in front of the huge man's chest.

Jayne stared down at the man. Forest folk were a peculiar genetic lot. The original mountain settlers had spent so many decades up in the highlands, they were now built for the terrain. They were a small subculture, their frames short and slight. Lean in the muscle, but it mad

Comments
Friday, 01 February 2008 20:07
A/N: I just wanted to say that this took me so long because of the element of why Mal is so skittish about Meilin, I have been debating from the beginning how to bring it to light, and it was actually going to be showcased earlier through flashbacks. However due to the content I had envisioned and not knowing if I could even write something so raw and grusome, much less make you guys read it, I worked it into something I've jotted out for River in regards to her abilities and the responsibility that comes with it.
EPM0001
Saturday, 02 February 2008 02:41
I just love this!! The way Mal is coming around to Meilin is sweet and the way your handling River's insights is wonderful.
Sunday, 03 February 2008 02:55
The last part with River and Inara is brilliant. They remind me of the Graphic Novel bits about the yarn, but not as cryptic, as River is now more lucid. And Inara, thanking her for sharing the insights into Mal's behavior toward Meilin, sweet.

nicely developed chapter



Monday, 04 February 2008 13:32
The part about Mal giving Meilin his baby stuff is so cute, and the scene with River and Inara was powerful.

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