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Homesick: Chapter 4

Friday, January 11, 2008

Further explanation of how exactly Simon and his father have such a falling out. Simon/Kaylee, hints of Mal/Inara

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Homesick: Chapter 4

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The day Simon and his father called his sister at the Academy was the same day he received his last letter from her. After that final correspondence there had been no more and Simon’s heart broke with the absence, especially now that he knew exactly what she was trying to tell him.

He’d been scouring the cortex for weeks, searching for any clues that might lead him to this Academy that he now knew to be a lie. Every minute when he was not at work or catching a few hours of restless sleep, he was on the Cortex, searching, scanning, digging. And he had nothing to show for it.

Until today. He’d found an address, an old address connected to one of the first documents published by the Academy. Simon had latched onto this discovery, a newfound hope blossoming in his heart. I’m coming mei mei.

And then he’d searched some more and discovered that the address was in a blackout zone – an Alliance controlled portion of the city closed off to civilians. There were cases of course of people infiltrating the areas, some thrill-seeking junkies actually got off on the chance to thwart the mightiest power in the ‘verse. Simon had never been one of them before, but if it would lead him to his sister, he would go anywhere, do anything, regardless of the consequences.

Wearing dark clothes and his warmest coat – it was almost winter – Simon had made his way into the area just as night fell. He had managed to find the building that corresponded with the address. It was abandoned of course, appeared to have been for years, but the sight of it, sitting empty and dormant struck him deeply. He feared the same fate might have already befallen his sister. Did she consider herself abandoned? Cast aside by parents and a brother who had willingly turned her over to an unknown fate? He shuddered to consider it.

Just as his hope was fading he’d been picked up, dragged to a local precinct, where he was now, sitting in a jai

Comments
Friday, 11 January 2008 11:31
OOoh, chilling. Clever how Chen got Gabriel to say he would issue a warrant for his son's arrest for kidnapping River. The way you are unfolding this story gives a very believable feel to how things may have happened and the Tams reactions. You also humanise them without demonising them. Bravo. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 11 January 2008 13:22
>“You have my word, no harm will befall your children while the Alliance is looking for them.”

Interesting turn of phrase, particuarly as it doesn't say what will happen after the are found ...
Friday, 11 January 2008 14:23
sorry not to have caught up with this story sooner - it's great!:)
Friday, 11 January 2008 17:06
Jane0904 -
You caught that, huh?

Trust me, the turn of phrase was not an accident ... :)
Friday, 11 January 2008 23:32
I take it the recording was heavily edited as the Tam's might have been alarmed to see someone putting that huge needle thingy in their daughter's head.

Also, I like how you brought in the detail about Mr. Tam authorizing the warrant. That sounds necessary, legally speaking, for a kidnapping charge against a brother taking his sister from school.

As I've stated before, I'm glad to see the Tam's portrayed as caring for their children. Clueless but caring.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Sunday, 13 January 2008 15:02
This may sound strange but I really liked Regan Tam in this...for all the hatred I have for the father, the mother looks quite innocent. Mr.Tam is just looking forward to make Simon pay for going down and take his sister with him by locking him in a bug house - which is where he should be!! Hope to see more soon =>

Keep flying ;)

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