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Make a Wish (5/5)

Sunday, February 24, 2008

Kaylee and Simon decide to keep the pregnancy a secret from the rest of the crew. An unexpected turn of events leaves them lost. Simon/Kaylee, River, Mal, Inara. PG-13

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4388    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: This is the last chapter. Enjoy!

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Make a Wish: Chapter 5

A Wish Deferred

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“Kaylee!”

Mal’s booming voice echoed through the cargo bay as he charged up the stairs and towards the engine room. Steadying himself against the wall as the ship again buckled beneath his feet, Mal stifled a curse and sped up, storming into the galley. Meeting Inara’s concerned gaze and Jayne’s uncaring one, Mal questioned, “Where’s my ruttin’ mechanic?”

Shrugging, Jayne continued to clean one of his girls, even as the ship rocked again. Heading towards the hatch that led to the bridge, Mal yelled, “Albatross, hold her steady, would ya?”

“Trying to, captain,” the young woman’s strained voice came back. “Going to need Kaylee’s help though to get her on the ground in one piece.”

“Mal, what’s wrong?” Inara asked quietly, keeping a hand to the table as she rose to meet him.

Whirling on her, Mal gestured around the room, noting a few of the trinkets that had come dislodged as a result of the rocking and told her, “We might be crashin’.” Stalking past her and towards the engine room, he ground out, “I’ll let you know if we die.”

Inara watched Mal go, frowning at his back. Looking to Jayne, the big oaf was still lost in the meticulous task of polishing one of his pistols. Content that he did not suspect anything, Inara hurried from the room and made it to the bridge, watching as River’s lithe arms gripped at the controls. Standing behind the young pilot’s chair, Inara asked quietly, “Is it bad?”

Glancing to her for only a minute, River’s big eyes met Inara’s and she nodded. Focusing back on the task of landing the ship safely, River said softly, “I know she can’t get there right now, but I really need her help.”

Nodding once, Inara took a deep breath and then headed for Simon and Kaylee’s bunk. She hated to bother her friend whom she knew was having terrific bouts of morning sickness, but it appeared that if the young

Comments
Monday, 25 February 2008 00:17
Sorry I came in late. That was some powerful and emotional stuff. Good to see you still writing.

I'm finally getting around to posting the rest of YOU CAN'T GO HOME AGAIN. Please comment.
Monday, 25 February 2008 09:56
The thing that spoilt this story for me was the ongoing way you painted Mal as such an uncaring unfeeling piece of *goushi*. If Kaylee and Simon had simply been up front with the Captain from the start most of this trauma and tragedy could have been avoided. Having not only Simon and Kaylee treat him like crap but also Inara glaring at him like he is the lowest form of life when he doesn't know what the hell is really going on is a bit much. Yes, he can be hard and implaccable and a right *hundan* when needs must but Kaylee is his *mei mei* and he loves her. I really hated the way you showed nothing but love and kindness between Kaylee and Simon, with Inara and River also knowing and keeping the secret from Mal and feel it was massively unfair. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 25 February 2008 13:26
Wow, you certainly know how to twist a plot. I never suspected anything like this was going to happen.

As always, a fantastic piece of writing that leaves me hoping for a sequel. Please?
Monday, 25 February 2008 13:38
I tend to agree that Mal is somewhat badly treated in this fic, and I don't think it would have taken that long for either Mal to figure it out, or them to tell him, but that's your POV. Having said that, your twist with the exploding entry couplings was pure Joss, and only would have been closer if Kaylee hadn't survived! A sequel would be good, if only to salvage some of Mal's reputation, but you made me almost cry with emotion. Good writing.
Friday, 12 June 2009 04:15
I DID cry when I read this. Shortly after my fiancee and I first met, she feared she might have gotten pregnant from her previous boyfriend. After several nights of researching her symptoms, we found out that she had been pregnant, but that she had lost the baby. I can tell you from personal experience that their reactions are as real as it gets, from the first realization (I broke the news to her as well) to the anger to the reconciliation.

If the coincidence (or lack thereof) could be any greater, we're engaged for starters, and this fall we're attending Dragon*Con as Simon and Kaylee. This fic brought back all of the feelings I've felt from losing the child to proposing to the intense love that can form between two people who are there for each other through something like this. These might seem like odd words, but they're the only ones I can think of that can come anywhere close to expressing my thoughts and feelings: Thank you.

Chi
Saturday, 13 June 2009 01:37
I love this story.

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