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New Haven: Chapter 10 (LAST CHAPTER)

Thursday, January 10, 2008

(Previously called The Courtship Dance) Post-BDM; S/K, M/I; LAST CHAPTER: In wrapping up, River allows herself to oversee the day, while couples do some talk'n

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A thousand apologies for not being prompt with the chapter that will hopefully clarify those pesky questions. Real life annoyingly refrained me from taking the hour it takes to post this. Regardless, I give you the last chapter before I take a breif hiatus to work out the next episodic plot....

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River was well pleased with her horse placement.

After Colter Irving drove down the road, Zoe, Mal and big brother Simon had rode off to go out and work the herd. It left her home with Inara and Kaylee, and the three had gone to work themselves. Inara was busy inside, repairing some clothes, keeping up with the never ending dirty laundry and house keeping (regardless it sounded matronly, she was unsung hero of their crew, for the house would have fallen to pieces if it weren't for her organization and care); Kaylee was in her little shop welded of old cargo crates, eagerly working on making locks, and River was in the barn. she had finished her chores quite some time ago, feeding all of the animals, then gathering eggs and milking their dairy cows.

So with nothing to do, she and her loyal feline companion were sitting on a hay stack, watching three of the new horses. The other two were out working, but at the moment she was watching her own horse. The registered name for the little sorrel mare with white stockings and a blazed face was Angle's Copper Willow, however she was simply called Willow. The horse, young and curious, stretched it's neck out and sniffed the crown of the teen's head, letting out a nicker.

The two Jacks given to the captain by Simon, nickered as well. They were a male and female team, hardy horses that were a roan and a grey that had matured to near white. On paper they were Shadow Fox's Tao and Shadow Rebel's Nui, yet to their new people they were simply called Tao and Nui. They were agreeable horses, for their large breed came with large hearts. River had already discovered they were very fond of being brushed and sweet talked to, as Kaylee had

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Thursday, 10 January 2008 21:00
I've been reading all along but I don't think I commented yet so here it goes =) The fact that Simon gave something so precious for the needs of his new family shows once more how loyal he can be after saving his meimei and I really loved his relationship with Kaylee. But nothing was like Mal & Inara, the part where she confesses the 'show-leg' made me want to get in the monitor *lol* and I also love the way you portray the effects she has on him; she soothes him and brings out the best of him – it’s just the way it is! Bring more up soon :)

Keep flying ;)

P.T.O

I adored River and the kittens :D
Friday, 11 January 2008 01:29
Excellent story. You showed a very dark side of Mal which had me worried for a bit, yet you still managed to bring him back to his family.

I agree about River with the cats. She was just like a little witch with her familiar.

And of course everyone loves Simon and Kaylee fan service.
Friday, 11 January 2008 14:25
just caught up with the grand finale! well done Mr T:)

over the course of this story your writing has been scattering many a pearl before swine like me!
Friday, 11 January 2008 17:36
ROTFL! Kaylee getting Simon on the baby thing was just SO perfectly Kaylee.

And its about time Mal confessed and did some apologizing!

Very nice conclusion. I think this was probably my favorite chapter.

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