Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Four

Wednesday, November 28, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. A little single chapter story. Someone on Serenity has a birthday. Just some fluff. And would I be lulling you into a false sense of security? NEW STORY

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3602    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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It was her birthday. All day. Ever since she’d woken up five minutes ago. Bethany lay in bed, listening to the sounds of the ship around her, but being careful not to peek. Not that peeking was easy at the moment, not with Auntie River putting out so much static, as Auntie Frey said. But for more than a few weeks now she’d come across people talking in odd corners, and their conversations had stopped when she arrived, and she knew they were talking about what to get her, so she’d just smiled sweetly and walked on. She’d been good too … well, better than usual.

She knew some of the things she was going to get were clothes, of course, and things the grown-ups thought she needed. But there’d be other stuff. They’d asked, mostly like it wasn’t important, like Uncle Mal did just before they landed on Greenleaf.

“So, excited about your birthday, short stub?” They’d been sitting in the cargo bay, watching Uncle Jayne try to teach Ethan how to play horseshoes.

She nodded. “Yes.”

“Your Ma’s gonna make a cake, I’ve heard.”

“Chocolate. With sprinkles.”

“That a fact.”

“And chocolate cream inside.”

“Sounds shiny.” They watched as Ethan dropped one of the horseshoes on Uncle Jayne’s foot, and he tried real hard not to swear.

“He’ll be going back to wearing his boots, no matter what your Auntie River says,” Uncle Mal said, holding his laughter in his throat. “Slippers just ain't him, even though he makes a lot of noise in the others.”

“Makes her teeth rattle,” Bethie agreed.

“Ain't surprised.” They continued to watch for a while. “So … what’s the kinda thing you expect to come out of that wrapping paper?”

She would have sighed if she hadn’t been expecting it. “Well, prob’ly something to wear. Momma’ll prob’ly get me that. And a pair of shoes.” She swung her feet up and stared at them. “Daddy says I’m growing too fast for his wallet.”

“Not too fast, Bethie. Just right, “ Uncle Mal assured her.

“’N’ there’s prob’ly some books from Auntie River. Or something to wear.

Comments
Wednesday, 28 November 2007 12:36
What a wonderful piece of fluff, Jane! The last line was the topper - so perfect. Wonderful to see the crew through other eyes for a change. There has been an occasional trend on your part to put a fluffy piece right before everything goes wrong, so I guess this is our warning of things to come!
Wednesday, 28 November 2007 12:42
Such lovely fluff! :D
Wednesday, 28 November 2007 13:09
Loved this and rolled up right at the end when you had Bethie quoting Mutant Enemy - "Grrr. Argh." Very shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 28 November 2007 17:41
I loved this story. A pirate ship is what every 4 year old Reader on a space ship needs!

Loved the "Grr, Argh" at the end too. It was a very nice touch.
Wednesday, 28 November 2007 19:32
Beautifully observed. I loved Mal's *subtle* wondering about what Bethie really wanted --
MERRYWYN
Wednesday, 28 November 2007 19:34
I love all of your stories, and have to say that you get better with each post.

The last line just made me laugh (which is a problem cuz I'm at work)

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