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Quitter: part 23

Sunday, November 11, 2007

In which Mal receives a package and we tie up every loose end. That's All, Folks. The End.

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Serenity waited out at the edge of Persephone’s orbit, and the second shuttle dropped down towards the uninhabited outskirts of the city at dusk the day before the appointed meeting. The plan was that Serenity would not arrive until after Mal and Atherton Wing had their conversation and the shuttle had rejoined Serenity. Mal had sent Lord Warrick a wave saying he would arrive in four days’ time to deliver Isabel’s beef; which they hoped would be enough to establish a time when they were not on Persephone.

Mal, Zoe and Jayne parked the shuttle in as secluded a place as they could find and started walking. They had twelve hours to make their rendezvous. They each carried a large duffle, Jayne’s full of weaponry, Zoe and Mal’s full of blankets with which to construct a simulacrum of Inara. Four hours of brisk walking brought the trio to the parade grounds, an empty field just outside the city, used by the local social clubs for fetes, carnivals and polo matches. It was the traditional spot for duels, and as such was studiously avoided by any local law enforcement. People who fought duels were not of a class to brook interference in their pleasures by a mere government employee.

Taking turns at watch, Mal, Zoe and Jayne passed the rest of the night. Well before dawn Mal and Zoe walked into the middle of the field and created something that might be a lying down woman; Mal spread a groundsheet and lay down on it next to the might-be-Inara, hands folded calmly on his belly, gun close under his coat.

“Okay, Mal, perimeter’s still clean. I’m taking my position,” Jayne’s voice spoke into Mal’s comm link.

“Shiny. Zoe’s just on her way, too. I think we’re good to go. Don’t shoot unless I tell you to, dong ma?” Mal said to Jayne on the comm and to Zoe as she stood above him.

“Got it, sir,” Zoe said. “But I’m not planning to let him kill you, sir. Just so you know.”

“I’m not planning on it, neither. Co

Comments
Sunday, 11 November 2007 19:56
I was so pleased Mal finally got to take care of Atherton Wing in a manner most fitting. Also, none of our crew came close to death, hey, that is almost a first! Loved the parcel at the end from Isobel, I really ended up liking her a whole lot and it was so kind of her to get him new boots and fixings for his feet. Think she might be turning up in another of your fics some time. Thanks for a good story. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 11 November 2007 22:03
Very well done throughout, and a lovely ending to the tale! Look forward to more from you soon! :D
Monday, 12 November 2007 00:16
Absolutely loved this story. Ath was done away with very, very nicely and I loved the boots. I hope we see Isabel again soon.
Monday, 12 November 2007 17:33
An excellent end to a fun read -- the boot gift-box was a really nice touch from Isabel to Mal. Thanks for sharing.

:-)
Tuesday, 13 November 2007 13:26
I really liked this whole tale, although I felt perhaps the end with Atherton was a little quick. But I too loved the boots ending ...
ACESSIISAMMY
Friday, 05 June 2009 18:17
Enjoyed this greatly. I hope you decide to give us more.

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