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Defining Moments (Repost)

Friday, November 9, 2007

Repost! A short, sad, poetical little fic about sacrifice and love. Implied Mal/Inara.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1487    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A.N. Hello all! Repost because of the unfortunate hacking occurrence...so to reiterate, this is just a sad, poetical little fic that I thought I would test the waters with here …Obviously, I don’t own any of the characters or anything as Joss Whedon, the master of goodness such as Firefly, and some random corporations do.

Onward, brave souls…and pretty please review again!

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It is a bit ironic how it can take a lifetime to finally reach one instant in time, and one instant in time to steal a lifetime.

It was ridiculous really. She shouldn’t have even been there. There was no life-defining to be had that day; it was a simple outing, one of the rare and treasured few hours where the crew was given their leave, and one of those days where there had been a cancellation and high-paying clients were scarce. She had joined them in town, having heard Kaylee’s squeals from a ways off and felt her heart racing even before she had seen him.

“Inara! What’re you doin’ here?” Kaylee had asked brightly, retracing her steps so that she could loop her arm in Inara’s, and alerting the rest of the crew to her presence.

“Yeah, didn’ expect to be seein’ you for a few days. Pay wasn’t good enough? Or maybehaps the young fellow didn’t have quite as much stamina as you expected,” Mal had sniped at her, earning him a sharp look from Zoë and a grunt of laughter from Jayne. She had felt her smile fade and her anger rise.

“I believe you saw him, captain, and he is under similar employ. Having been around men with guns and a need for petty thieving for so long, I know by now when there isn’t much to be had,” she had replied flippantly, noting with a demented sense of pleasure, and an extreme wave of guilt, the look of indignation and anger that marred his features. Wash had given a low exclamation of “Yikes!” that made Zoë emit a small snort of laughter as she had turned from Mal’s death stare to a panicky Kaylee who was glancing nervously at Simon who had been pulling at his ear, visibly unc

Comments
Friday, 09 November 2007 08:43
I don't recall reading this before, but it's very good. And this is how it could end, not with a bang but with three little words. And I think he said them back, even if she never heard.
Friday, 09 November 2007 12:27
I did read this before, but I'm not sure I commented. I like the details -- particularly River's observation about the waterfall.
Friday, 09 November 2007 14:58
Ah, yes! I remember this one :) In fact, I LOVE it! Is there a sequel somewhere???

Keep flying ;)
Monday, 19 November 2007 05:10
This reads just as well the second time around. I'm looking forward to your continuing the story.
2X2
Saturday, 23 February 2008 13:38
Wow, I must have missed this one the first time through, or somehow have forgotten it, but I really really like this. You have a nice use of words, descriptive without being overly saturated. Very nice!

I'm off to read the sequels now!

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