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Here Be Dragons (Part XV)

Wednesday, August 11, 2004

The Captain lets his mind wander. Kaylee makes ammunition and a new player appears on the horizon

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Disclaimer – Everything either does belong to Joss or it should. I’m just borrowing his shiny ‘verse for a while.

The 21st Lancers belong to the British Army so I’m borrowing them too. I hope they don’t mind.

Thanks to my regular readers for making it worthwhile to continue the story and special thanks to my Proof-Reader Landry.

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Serenity/Granite Gorge – Underway – 2520AD

The coffee was too darn hot to drink so Mal sat back and let it cool whilst listening to the ship. He’d left Inara sleeping and headed up to the galley to think. He was grateful they didn’t try to set up a victory party to celebrate the return of the conquering heroes. It didn’t feel like a cause for celebration just an unpleasant, albeit necessary, task.

The ships were underway again. Serenity once again in her usual spot being pushed backwards through the black by the larger ship. Well she’d earned a rest after the last little adventure. She was scorched by laser fire and her engines had been pushed right to the wall by Wash trying to get as much space between them and the nuke as possible before it razed the Reaver Camp.

Sipping the dark brew Mal let his thoughts drift over his crew. It didn’t seem so long ago that he’d craved some action to get them on their toes but a few months grace would be just the ticket right about now.

The Shepherd was becoming increasingly distant and that was a cause for concern. For most of the crew, even the ones that largely believed in the notion of religion, they found putting aside moral considerations and uncertainties was a far easier task than it was for Book. He agonised over such things, the ethical ambiguities of their lifestyle ate at his soul. You could see it in his face.

Mal sympathised, he had his own inner demons but he fought them by putting the interests of his people above his own. Striving to be a good Captain was his reparation for things he had, or hadn’t, done and clearly Book’s devotion to his faith was a close parallel to his own devot

Comments
Wednesday, 11 August 2004 22:59
Oh... bravo! The analogy and discussion of the economic nature of the Alliance as compared to the East India Company was first rate. Very well thought out.

I've enjoyed all such studies you've done throughout the series, but also was pleased to see you spend some time on the character introspection. Well played.

And happy to see the new hint of peril at the end.
Wednesday, 11 August 2004 23:25
Mal's musings were right on, Hotpoint. Gotta love a man that can't do without his java ;-) Who are these new players, why do the Reavers fear them, what's to become of laura...I guess I can wait for the upcoming installments...Very shiny, HP.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 12 August 2004 02:15
Hotpoint - speechless with the depth, fludity, beauty of your storylines. Please keep the sensational installments coming! Susan
Thursday, 12 August 2004 14:21
Hopoint, once again you've got me waiting with anticipation for the next installment!!
Thursday, 12 August 2004 16:32
Really love this series, so very shiny it dazzles me! And I love how you write Mal. Laura is a worry though, I can't help wondering if the new guys coming into the picture are tied in with her. Can't wait for the next part, *Xie xie ni* - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 12 August 2004 16:45
Hotpoint, you make lectures fun. But the most fun was everyone's reaction to the thought of having more kids. I really wish there was something to be done with Laura. Seems a shame to have so much ability inimicable to our heroes, and right when they seem to be wandering into the cross-hairs again.
Monday, 16 August 2004 19:15
Guildsister - Thanks for your comments. I've been trying to get a handle on the socio-economics of the Firefly Verse to add a bit of background substance to my Fics. Nice to know it was well recieved :-)

MalsDoxy - Always a pleasure to be told I can write musings okay... as well as violence :-p

Anonomymous - "speechless with the depth, fluidity, beauty"? Too kind by far

SoulOfSerenity - I'll try not to leave it to long between chapters okay?

AMDOBELL - No more than your Fics have been known to dazzle me I assure you

artships - I'm a frustrated teacher at heart :-p

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