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Would you, could you?

Monday, October 28, 2002

A vignette in an alternate universe where Simon and Kaylee work together on a hospital in the Capital city

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Now, if you haven’t figured this out yet, I’m a huge Simon/Kaylee fan, as is my friend Megan. So, Megan and I were talking and we wondered if Simon and Kaylee weren’t the only two available singles on Serenity, would they still be good friends and, possibly, fall in love. The following story takes that idea and runs with it. In this hypothetical world (AU or elseworld) River didn’t go to the Academy, preventing Simon from having to go on the lam. In this world Kaylee’s past is different too. She’s on Osiris, Capitol City, working as mechanic in the hospital where Simon is a trauma surgeon. It’s a snapshot of their lives and, just to warn you, it’s very bittersweet.

Would you, Could you?

“Well, hey there Dr. Tam,” Kaylee said in her warm familiar way.

“Hello Kaylee,” Simon replied, politely holding the door for her as they exited CC General's E.R. staff entrance. “What are you still doing here, I thought you got off at four?”

“I do,” Kaylee sighed as she reached behind her head and pulled out a grubby bun, letting her soft brown hair cascade down to her shoulders. “Some brilliant nurse spilled a cup a green tea on the CCAP controls so’s a course it shorted out. An’ then when I get into it I sees they got the whole thing cross wired with the M-Dar, which just don’t even make sense but floor manager told me they got them machines from the same company and had some zui huai dan, pardon my Chinese, install the ‘quipment an’ so, since neither machine weren’t gonna be wrokin’ ‘till CCAP’s circuits dried out I figured I mighta’well clean up the whole mess then’n there. ‘Caus ya know, if I don’t, nobody else would and then one a them would have some serious problem an’ the whole set would be down fer a week!”

Kaylee looked up from her impassioned monologue to see Simon chuckling softly.

“What?” she demanded.

“Nothing,” Simon said, shaking his head, “It’s just I’ve never met anyone as passionate about medical equipment as you. I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to laugh at you . . . that is, I wasn’

Comments
Monday, 28 October 2002 11:53
Bittersweet is right. You can still feel the tension in your story. You have created them in Simons "enviroment" very well. She s needed but yet she doesn't quite "fit" Theres a belief out there that says we all live many lives through time and naturally gravitate to the same people again and again. Your story is a interesting take on that. Great dialog. I am envious I wish I had a better hand at it. You have caught the spirit of the characters. Keep writing! I enjoy your stories.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 28 October 2002 23:53
ooh. i like it. I'm a huge k/s fan myself. great job.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 11 November 2002 11:16
It's amazing how well the characters are portrayed, I can really see both of them, very true to what we have seen on screen
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 17 December 2002 04:34
Great characterization. Loved it despite the bittersweet ending.
Tuesday, 24 December 2002 07:24
I liked this a lot! The only thing you gotta do now is write a sequel and have Kaylee and Simon get together!! :)
Wednesday, 08 January 2003 06:30
how to explain the perfct girl to parents and societ who will only see her as imperfect. I only hope to stand up beter than simon in your story. Exelent. Keep writing, damnit.
Tuesday, 02 September 2003 20:20
Poor Kaylee! Damn I have no use for people like you depicted as the Tams. Very well written. You should consider writing professionally (if you don't already, if you do, I can see why!)
JAZMYN
Tuesday, 15 February 2005 08:15
u have to write more plz that was fantastic
polz write more plz plz plz
jazz

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