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SECOND CHANCES: Chapter 18

Tuesday, June 12, 2007

Simon, Inara, River, Jayne and Zoe put their plan into motion, while leaving Kaylee, Mal and Rafe behind. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara, River/Rafe

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A/N: See? I get those nice shiny comments and you get chapters posted every day! I call that a win-win!

Thanks to Leiasky for the beta on this one. Just as an update, I finished the sequel to this story, "Unforeseen Consequences" over the weekend. It's 240+ pages of angsty goodness! And a little fluff ...

Keep leaving those comments, pretty please??!?!?

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Chapter 18

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“She’s not really speaking to me so I’m not exactly sure how she’s feeling.” With a heavy heart, Simon let out a sigh, his eyes gazing to Kaylee’s motionless form as she sat, hands in her lap across the room. Looking back to Eli and Evelyn with the most forlorn of expressions, the young doctor added, “I’m still concerned that she might-“

Resting a comforting hand to his shoulder, Evelyn smiled warmly. “Don’t worry, Simon. We’ll take good care of her.”

Nodding stiffly, Simon bent his head closer to Eli’s to give a few instructions, while across the way, Inara and Mal were saying goodbye. The captain’s weight was fully supported on a crutch, the muscles of his forearm bulging under the stress of leaning on it so heavily. But due to his stubbornness, he’d refused a wheelchair. So, Inara had simply decided to ignore his machismo and stay as close to him as possible.

The fingers of his free hand rested softly against Inara’s cheek and she turned into the touch, brushing her lips over his palm, before turning those huge, brown eyes to meet his gaze. “We’ll be fine, Mal,” she assured him, forcing a smile to her face she did not feel.

Swallowing uncomfortably, Mal shifted his weight and murmured, “Yeah, I know.”

Smiling softly at his failed attempt to mask his true feelings, Inara squeezed his hand in hers and said, “Zoe and Jayne won’t let anything happen to me. You know that.”

“Damn right, ‘cause I’ll kill ‘em both if somethin’ does,” he muttered fiercely. Swaying a bit on his feet, Mal begrudgingly allowed Inara to guide hi

Comments
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 04:33
This is still all manner of intriguing. And the picture of Mal reading "with the voices" to a group of kids is just lovely. As you know, I've currently got Mal and kids on the brain too!
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 04:36
Aww, Mal reading to the kids sounds so cute. I think he's heading towards domestication, though, which isn't a good place for Malcolm Reynolds. You best be careful that he still gets his share of gunfights in the future. ;-)

I wonder though, if Mal will search out the answer to Inara's quest on his own or if she'll have to explain it to him. Either way should prove to be quite angsty, but I can't see how it could do anything but draw them closer, if he can get over the fact she tried to hide it.

jW
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 06:17
I hope Simon getsall the family back. Talk about between a rock and a hard place. Kaylee without her family means a sad Kaylee, and when he then tells her he is gonna go get them back, she becomes sad Kaylee as well... the poor man can't win!

But I hope all goes well, and Kaylee has good news for Simon when he gets back! Then her family could celebrate with her.

XD What a great way to start the day, a good breakfast and a S/K fanfiction. Looking forward to the next xhapter.
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 08:33
This was all manner of shiny. I just hope nobody sees through Simon and Inara's ruse until they can buy back Kaylee's missing folk. I just loved Mal with Ash and how typical it was that having agreed to read the boy a story (with all the voices), Ash comes back with a whole tribe of kids to hear the story. And poor Kaylee now worried about Simon as well but at least they are doing something, trying to get them back for her and that has to be some kind of comfort. As for Inara's secret she will tell Mal I hope when she is ready and feels strong enough, when that day comes maybe her heart can start to heal from the hurt. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 08:58
I love that Jayne is the one to point out that Simon and Inara have to do exactly what they said, and go to the theatre! That man has smarts.

As for Asher ... couldn't you see your way clear to changing your mind? I think Kaylee'd be a perfect mother for him.

And as for Mal reading a story to all those children ... my heart just melted!
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 12:03
Asher is the most precious thing ever. I want him!!! lol.

Something about reading your fics gives me maternal urges, odd that.

Anyway, awesome chapter, loved the Simon/Inara/Jayne part, what an odd little group! More more more!!!

Ten, of course.

xx
Wednesday, 13 June 2007 01:26
Hmmm...definitely getting the urge to shift my support for the adoption of Asher from Simon and Kaylee to Mal and Inara. Cuz I get the feeling Kaylee's got a little bun in the oven after that hot and sudsy smutfest of a chapter or two ago;D

And damn straight Jayne should be reminding Simon and Inara about keeping up the charade! Man might not know which fork to use when eating salad on Osiris...but he knows how to keep people from guessing tricksy intentions;D

BEB

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