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SECOND CHANCES: Chapter 13

Wednesday, June 6, 2007

Mal, Jayne and Zoe attempt to rescue Kaylee's folks while Simon and Kaylee have a little wedding. Oh, and Badger's up to no good. Kaylee/Simon, Mal/Inara, River/Rafe

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A/N: We're only halfway through folks ... what did you expect happy endings and puppies?

Thanks to Leiasky and Kaynara for the beta. Enjoy!

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Chapter 13

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“Kaylee?” Dasya greeted her warmly with a hug and the friendly smile she remembered.

Stepping away from him and reaching for Simon’s hand, she told the monk, “It’s real good to see you.” Glancing to her fiancé, she added, “This is Simon.”

Extending a hand, which Dasya shook firmly, Simon watched the other man’s eyes light with recognition. “Ah yes, your beloved,” he commented, his gaze flickering to Kaylee and giving her an indulgent smile which she returned. “I was hoping we would meet one day.”

“It’s a pleasure,” Simon told him, still slightly confused as to why out of all of the Buddhist temples in the city, Kaylee had demanded they go to this one – and how exactly she knew this monk so intimately.

“You look radiant,” the older man told her, again focusing his eyes on Kaylee and her beautifully sheathed form. Simon could agree with the man there. She and Inara had picked out an absolutely gorgeous dress of red silk. With a high mandarin collar, it fell in a straight line down to the tops of Kaylee’s feet, glancing over every curve she owned. Her arms were bare, but the slight warmth of the day assured she would not be cold.

“Yes, she does,” Simon murmured, almost absentmindedly, before pulling Kaylee to his side and pressing a kiss to her cheek.

Smiling to him, Kaylee kissed him back and then said, “Actually, we came to ask ya for a favor.” She explained, a bit hastily, the true intent behind their visit and why they were so dressed up for the middle of the day. Dasya listened closely, greeting Eli and Evelyn as they arrived a few minutes later, a bag of necessities tucked under Evelyn’s arm.

“And you’re sure about this?” the monk asked, his gaze shifting from Kaylee to Simon and back again. “Despite the current situation w

Comments
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 03:30
Ouch, not good. Glad to see someone not portraying River as invincible for once though, even when it came to actually fighting. Never thought I'd see Badger pull one over on her though, though it certainly fits what with all the lying.

You better be telling the truth when you say the next chapter is coming soon! ;-)
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 05:22
Badger is so freakin' dead! Between River and Mal, Badger is so screwed it ain't even funny any more!

:(

Honestly, this chapter would have been a massive downer if it hadn't been for you showing us the lead-up and aftermath of Simon and Kaylee's wedding. The amount of beautiful love coming off these two definitely warms the cockles of my heart. Maybe even the sub-cockles;)

BEB
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 07:04
Just the kin od story I needed to read before a day of studying. With the cliff hanger I'll be thinking about it all day!

I'm glad to see Kaylee and Simon are finally wed, a Buddhist wedding. That's something intresting, I like how you tied it back ;p

Badger is a dead fink! Although how thats gonna happen is beyond me. Maybe Simon and Kaylee will come and rescue them, guns blazeing and wrenchs swinging. XD When Kaylee find out she's gonna be sad T.T But at least she now has a husband to support her.

I like, can't wait to read the next one.
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 08:03
Can't help feeling this version of Badger would be long dead and pushing up the daisies ... but that doesn't mean you haven't crafted an excellent fic!

Wonder why Mal is so often the butt of injury and pain?

So what happens next???
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 08:50
YAY! They're married! Oh, that makes me HAPPY!.

Where is the afterwedding smut?!?!?!

And as for the last bit - River and Rafe were so sad, and then Badger... ooh, gotta agree with Mal, I hate him.

Such good writing here! love it!!
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 08:56
I want Badger to die a long slow death - preferrably in unbearable agony with no hope of recovery. Loved the wedding, that was perfect and neatly takes care of Simon's fears about having his parents spoil things by taking over (as his mother certainly would. As for River, had she not been worried about Rafe she would have got Badger after breaking his henchman's nose. I couldn't see the real Badger ever having the backbone to front a plan like this to get at Mal, he would use someone else to do the actual dirty work and provide enough space for 'plausible denial' to Mal's face if it went wrong. This side of him is like the him he would like to be if he had the balls to pull it off. Hopefully someone will pull them off. 'Without' anaesthetic. Now, all we need is for the Butlers to help Simon and Kaylee foil the evil little King Pin's plans as soon as they work out what the good gorram happened. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 15:22
Badger does need to die a nice, painful death. And I like how you tied the location of the wedding back into the other story. But - ok, I must be the only one who feels a little cheated that we didn't get to see the actual ceremony!

I'm glad the parents won't h ave to concern themselves with re-scheduling anything now.

I wonder what the crew will say when they notice S/K are married. And who will notice first. . .

Inara is just setting herself up for disapointment by all this sneaking around and deception. I'm starting to actually want her not to find her kid.

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