Thanks for the feedback. Just FYI, I looove writing fight scenes.
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John’s cerulean eyes widened.
Simon’s brilliantly blue eyes widened.
The blonde growled and charged the doctor, slamming him violently into the wall in the corridor. Once in the hall he grabbed the rungs of the ladder leading up towards the second deck and leapt up them to disappear.
River, laughed as Simon was dazed and slumped against the wall. “Little boy can’t play rough.” Untangling herself from her spot on the bed she wafted over to him, chuckling all the while in her usual, less than sane fashion. She could have told John about Simon, but she hadn't. He had payed all of his attention to her because she was so confusing that he had completely missed Simon who had been trying the creep up on her to force her to take her medicine.
Her brother rubbed the back of his head as his sister came skipping out the room without a care in the world. Wincing he gave her a sore and confused look as Kaylee saw him on the floor and disheveled, gasped and hurried over.
“What happened?!” She helped him to his feet, finding he was wobbly and rather heavy. “Did River..”
“River did not beat me up.” He grunted as he stood up by himself and blinked a few times, his body weaving a bit while it found it’s center. Simon had to put his hand on that wall as Kaylee seemed fuzzy to him.
“Simon’s too weak to play fun.” His sister chortled as she spun lithely, playfully. “He can’t take it, poor Simon.”
Her brother’s blue eyes stared at her.
She gave him a wide grin. “I’m sorry I’m so strong.”
“It wasn’t River.” He exclaimed.
Kaylee folded her arms. “Then who did it?”
“Some blonde guy… I think..” He rubbed the back of his head brunette again. “Ow…” pulling his hand back he felt something warm and tacky. It was blood on his fingertips. Which, he quickly hid from the mechanic as she was sure to freak.
“A blonde guy.” Kaylee uttered skeptically. “Wash did it?”
“No, this guy was big,
:D
Seriously wonder how River will take John getting shot, his hand crushed and his nads bashed in. Not well, I suspect...
BEB
I agree with BEB, that was an awsome fight scene, and Jayne's line was amazing!
Wow, John will not die. He's like Tracy, they keep getting shot or hit, yet they just can't seem to die.
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