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Dancin' - 3/3

Thursday, May 10, 2007

Mal/Inara. The final installment of a Mal/Inara fic. Mal and Inara are fighting - again - and something's gotta give. NC-17.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3434    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: Okay, here it is - the long-anticipated final installment of "Dancin'." I really, really hope you like it, but considering the reaction to part 2, I have dusted off my armor. So, all comments are welcome and encouraged.

Thank you, thank you, thank you to, Kaynara for all the encouragement and the evil plot bunny that spawned this series. Oh, and the beta too.

If you need it, here's a link to the last chapter: http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16147>Dancin'; - 2/3

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Dancin’ – 3/3

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She had lied to him. Again.

Inara idly wondered when lying to Mal had become her first and often, only, line of defense. As she heard the shuttle door close behind him and screamed out in frustration, she felt her abdomen constrict and knew that her assurance that she was fine had been false.

Sighing heavily, Inara sank slowly onto her couch, wincing as the movement again aggravated what she assumed was a bruised rib. She really didn’t want to bother Simon, especially now, as he was no doubt settling in for a night with Kaylee. But Inara knew she had no hope of getting any rest without treatment. And at the moment, the only thing Inara wanted to do was sleep.

Releasing another big breath, Inara rose and headed for the comm. unit on her wall. Collecting herself the best she could, she depressed the button and called, “Simon?”

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Mal tromped through the ship, cursing and muttering under his breath the entire way. Both Jayne and Zoe tried to approach him, but with his head bent low, he simply ignored them, before reaching his bunk, hurriedly descending the ladder and then locking his hatch.

Standing in the middle of the small, utilitarian space, Mal wasn’t certain what he was feeling. He knew a good portion of it was rage, but not directed towards Inara. No, he was feeling all kinds of uncharitable towards the wang ba dan who had hurt her. His mind spinning as the image of her bruised and battered skin swam through his vision, Mal swung his arm low

Comments
Thursday, 10 May 2007 08:48
Wow. Build up the tension, why don't you? And such wonderful release ...
Thursday, 10 May 2007 09:13
Much as you know I love Mal/River, your take on Mal/Inara is just mouth-wateringly good! Thanks for sharing the end of this tale with us. Great work!
Thursday, 10 May 2007 10:09
Yay, this is the perfect outcome though for a moment or two I worried myself silly that they would argue again and nothing would be resolved. This was utterly shiny, thanks! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 10 May 2007 14:04
Fantastic, I'm too tired to leave a detailed comment, so please pretend I wrote something very complimenting.
Thursday, 10 May 2007 18:20
Oh TamSibling...the sheer level of brilliance you have shown here with this finale blew my mind into another plane of existence! Honestly, I am in complete and utter awe of how beautifully this was written and how well Mal and Inara were presented here:D

I have to admit though that I thought Inara was being rather dense when she was thinking Mal's habit of wanting to swoop in and "save" Inara from seemingly harmful situations was a sign of an overblown ego. However, I am glad that the topic was breached and discussed.

Oh...and the scene in the dining room? Oh Tian Yesu was it freakin' HOT! You are definitely all kinds of a dab hand at writing our BDHs at play without getting too clinical or pornographic;D

BEB
Thursday, 10 May 2007 23:52
I wasn't sure how you were going to resolve this (they seemed so far apart), but I think you've successfully brought them together without compromising who they are.

I like the way Inara demanded Mal's respect, before they moved any further,
and how Mal fought for a relationship beyond their obvious sexual obsession.

With them, it's like the love is already there. The tricky part, is the togetherness, that is a challenge to write. Maybe that is why we see so many
Mal/others. Easier for some?

You're Poe (a Romantic) reference was perfect for them.

Oh, and by the way, the table sex was frackin HOT!!
Friday, 11 May 2007 00:15
Oh my god...
That was the one perfect thing I've read, ever. I am not kidding, everything about this seemed so damm real it took my breath away. The interplay between them, the spats, the regret, gorram everything was perfect!
The kitchen scene? That was...whoa.
And I thought I was so far past 'whoa' it was ridiculous! I didn't enev see then ending until it hit me in the face. I've enjoyed this series from you immensely. It was absolutely freakin' amazing! Thank you!
Friday, 11 May 2007 04:01
TS! Good lord, that was some hot, hot writing! Let's hear it for kitchen table lovin'! Woo hoo!

But the angst, oh I loves me some angst and this was just perfect. Mal was so vulnerable, but not annoyingly so. Just spot on, truly.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 13:34
This was brillant

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