The Right To Love - Chapter 17
Friday, April 27, 2007
Final Chapter of the Simon-centric 100 prompt story. I hope you like it. Fluffy, fluffy, fluffy. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara. PG-13, just in case.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 4450 RATING: 10.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
A/N: Here it is, friends - the end of the Right To Love series! I certainly hope you like it and it lives up to all your expectations.
Previous Chapters:
http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15760>Chapter 1, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15783>Chapter 2, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15892>Chapter 3, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15910>Chapter 4, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15954>Chapter 5, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16005>Chapter 6, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16062>Chapter 7, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16114>Chapter 8, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16131>Chapter 9, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16142>Chapter 10, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16184>Chapter 11, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16209>Chapter 12, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16247>Chapter 13, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16274>Chapter 14, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16296>Chapter 15, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16314>Chapter 16
Link to http://www.geocities.com/maegovannen/Firefly/Joss100Challenge.html>prompt table
A final thanks to Leiasky for all the help, plot ideas and beta-ing. You are irreplaceable!
And please, please, please leave me a comment ... how else will I know to keep posting?
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The Right To Love - Chapter 17 - The End (Prompts 96-100)
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096. Sky
It had been a while since the crew of Serenity had seen sky. They hadn’t alighted on any planet since Greenleaf, and now, a month later, they were all feeling just a might twitchy to again get out. So, Mal finally relented, in truth needed the respite as much as the rest of them, and allowed R
I wasn't sure what Simon was planning, but I wasn't expecting a wedding. Good for you.
Fantastic story, hope to see more from you real soon.
I'm afraid I'm a total cynic so even though the vows were really well written, I cringed a little. But that's just me. From a writing point of view, they were beautiful and poetic.
And the fic as a whole? Perfection. Everything you want in an S/K fic.
Roll on whatever you have in store for us next.
1) ANY S/K fluff
2) the, I think, acurate portrayal of post traumatic symptoms in Kaylee.
3) Inara not being willing to leave Mal... and then trying to tell him to get out.
4) Kaylee making him get right back in
5) Pretty much any part with Kaylee's family, I could picture people like that being Kaylee's parents.
6) ANY S/K fluff (we need more of this... from you, 'cause you do it well)
-goblueguy
BEB
Mal and Inara's conversation was probably the best part, though.
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