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Noisy Neighbors

Wednesday, April 25, 2007

In crowded conditions, it pays to be considerate of your neighbors.

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Title: Noisy Neighbors 1/1

Author: hisgoodgirl

Disclaimer: All belong to Joss. They just play in my head.

Characters: Wash, Zoë, Jayne, Kaylee, Mal

Pairings Wash/Zoë, Jayne/Kaylee

Warning: NC-17 for adult references and language, and creative use of cordage.

Setting: In my AU, sometime after Kaylee had tired of Simon and decided that Jayne is more “satisfying”.

A/N: Any perceived reference to The Waltons is entirely a figment of the reader’s twisted imagination. Italics represent emphasis, Chinese phrases.

Cross-posted in my LJ. Comments are sincerely appreciated. Thanks!

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Noisy Neighbors

“Mmmmm. That was nice.” Zoë sighs and smiles lazily, easing herself free from her husband’s embrace, savoring the sweat-slick slide of dark skin on freckle-spangled light. The moments of connection and vulnerability she shares with Wash when making love are a delicious contrast to the professional persona she dons with her leather vest and gunbelt.

“That it was, that it was…” Wash slurs out, his whole body slack in the aftermath of ecstasy, waves of pleasure still rolling through him. The ginger-haired pilot’s eyes are still faintly crossed. He kisses his wife playfully on the tip of her nose and then settles back against the pillows, palm rising to cover the yawn that escapes him involuntarily. The single candle on the shelf beside their bunk flickers, edging their moist bodies in ruddy light.

As their own noisy breathing slows, the sounds from the neighboring bunk seem to build in volume. While no words can be distinguished, the cadence of Jayne’s deep voice punctuates a series of high-pitched shrieks from Kaylee that terminate in a shuddering wail. Wash and Zoë look at one another.

“Not again…” the pilot cringes, clasping his head between his splayed fingers. “This is the fourth night this week…”

A barely suppressed smile of amusement crosses the warrior woman’s face.

Comments
Wednesday, 25 April 2007 13:54
Heh <G>. Of course, if they were up for using gags in love-play, both couples could carry on without disturbing Mal's beauty sleep <BEG>.


Vera
Wednesday, 25 April 2007 14:26
But what does Simon have to say about this? If they're making that much noise, surely he can hear it from his quarters? Or is he up to something himself???
Wednesday, 25 April 2007 15:36
I love it! Really funny :)
Wednesday, 25 April 2007 17:20
*jaw drops*

Now that is just some hilariously brilliant stuff! Just picturing this scenario makes me want to shudder and cackle maniacally;D

Makes ya wonder though...is this what River feels like on a regular basis? Being able to hear/sense the various couples getting intimate at all hours and not really being restrained in their exuberances?

BEB
Thursday, 26 April 2007 02:30
I love how everyone says good night to everyone else goooood stuff
Thursday, 26 April 2007 17:19
Poor Mal, never gets to make noise of his own!
Wednesday, 05 December 2007 05:00
*sputter* that last walton-family like exchange had me laughing!
Monday, 22 August 2011 14:40
Still giggling at the "Captn Tight-Ass" so Jayne XD

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