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The Right To Love - Chapter 14

Sunday, April 22, 2007

Continuation of Simon-centric 100 Prompt story. The crew's shore leave turns deadly and Mal finds himself in an unenviable position. PG-13 for mentions of unpleasantness. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara.

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A/N: And the angst continues ... I hope you like it.

Thanks to Leiasky for the beta.

Only three chapters left after this one ...

Previous Chapters:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15760>Chapter 1, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15783>Chapter 2, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15892>Chapter 3, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15910>Chapter 4, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15954>Chapter 5, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16005>Chapter 6, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16062>Chapter 7, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16114>Chapter 8, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16131>Chapter 9, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16142>Chapter 10, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16184>Chapter 11, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16209>Chapter 12, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16247>Chapter 13

Link to http://www.geocities.com/maegovannen/Firefly/Joss100Challenge.html>prompt table

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The Right to Love - Chapter 14 (Prompts 81-85)

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081. Book

Walking arm and arm down the planked sidewalks, Kaylee and Inara chatted and laughed like two schoolgirls without a care in the world. Their ease with one another had been almost instantaneous from the minute they’d met and Kaylee had never been so glad to have another woman on board Serenity. Inara had become a true confidant and the older sister she’d never had, and Kaylee loved the fact that she could tell her just about anything.

Having just finished off an ice cream, Kaylee’s concern with her hips having vanished the minute she’d tried on a beautiful red dress that had fit her perfectly, she turned to her friend and asked, “So, what’s goin’ on with you an’ the cap’n?”

Smiling to her patiently, I

Comments
Sunday, 22 April 2007 18:33
NO!! ANGST!! NOOOOOO!!

Oh, I'm kidding, sort of. This is wonderful, as always. Just... nooooo!

See, I've just wrote a pure chapter of what to me is pure angst. And I was all proud cos I normally don't go there. And then I come on and read this and it's like... wow.

Now THAT's angst.

Ten! As always.

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Sunday, 22 April 2007 23:52
Oh Wow, poor Inara! I hope something really awful and EXTREMELY and EXCRUCIATINGLY painful happens to Adelei Niska, the man is so evil he could put the Devil out of his day job. It was the more awful because Inara had been so blissfully happy only moments before. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
WHELP
Monday, 23 April 2007 02:43
You really, really enjoy writing sadistic things, don't you?
Monday, 23 April 2007 03:29
Ok....that's IT! Mal has to find Niska and just eviscerate him for all the hell the little troll has put the crew through! Especially since Niska decided it was time to use Inara as the source of weakness...

This is just the epitome of angst, TamSibling! I honestly came *this* close to screaming "NO!" at the top of my lungs at reading about what Niska was doing to Inara. No punishment would be fitting...but Mal will give it his best shot, I think:(

BEB
Monday, 23 April 2007 04:25
They should have killed Niska when they had the chance!

Didn't expect him, great chapter.
Monday, 23 April 2007 05:48
Whelp - is that rhetorical?

You have to write the bad stuff so you can get to the fluff!

Hang in there ...
Tuesday, 24 April 2007 12:25
I'm always amazed at the power and tension of your writing ... I can't even begin to imagine the depth of Mal's despair at finding Inara's in the hands of his old enemy. Please update soon!
Wednesday, 25 April 2007 16:01
Bad stuff, fluff, its all good.

I love the end of this part with Inara being taken by Niska. Mal's going to be one pissed off captain.

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