A/N: And the angst continues ... I hope you like it.
Thanks to Leiasky for the beta.
Only three chapters left after this one ...
Previous Chapters:
http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15760>Chapter 1, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15783>Chapter 2, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15892>Chapter 3, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15910>Chapter 4, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15954>Chapter 5, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16005>Chapter 6, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16062>Chapter 7, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16114>Chapter 8, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16131>Chapter 9, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16142>Chapter 10, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16184>Chapter 11, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16209>Chapter 12, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16247>Chapter 13
Link to http://www.geocities.com/maegovannen/Firefly/Joss100Challenge.html>prompt table
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The Right to Love - Chapter 14 (Prompts 81-85)
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081. Book
Walking arm and arm down the planked sidewalks, Kaylee and Inara chatted and laughed like two schoolgirls without a care in the world. Their ease with one another had been almost instantaneous from the minute they’d met and Kaylee had never been so glad to have another woman on board Serenity. Inara had become a true confidant and the older sister she’d never had, and Kaylee loved the fact that she could tell her just about anything.
Having just finished off an ice cream, Kaylee’s concern with her hips having vanished the minute she’d tried on a beautiful red dress that had fit her perfectly, she turned to her friend and asked, “So, what’s goin’ on with you an’ the cap’n?”
Smiling to her patiently, I
Oh, I'm kidding, sort of. This is wonderful, as always. Just... nooooo!
See, I've just wrote a pure chapter of what to me is pure angst. And I was all proud cos I normally don't go there. And then I come on and read this and it's like... wow.
Now THAT's angst.
Ten! As always.
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You can't take the sky from me
This is just the epitome of angst, TamSibling! I honestly came *this* close to screaming "NO!" at the top of my lungs at reading about what Niska was doing to Inara. No punishment would be fitting...but Mal will give it his best shot, I think:(
BEB
Didn't expect him, great chapter.
You have to write the bad stuff so you can get to the fluff!
Hang in there ...
I love the end of this part with Inara being taken by Niska. Mal's going to be one pissed off captain.
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