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Old Warriors

Tuesday, April 3, 2007

A man walks into a bar... on U-day. A reunion between two old friends.

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Title: Old Warriors

Author: hisgoodgirl

Disclaimer: All belongs to Joss. His characters just come play in my head.

Rating: PG-15 for profanity

Characters: Mal, Jayne (not slash)

Timeline: Long after the Rebellion triggered by events in the BDM.

Warning: Some characters have deceased.

A/N: One look way down the road at a reunion between a couple of BDHs. Also posted on the ff_fanfic and fireflyholidays comms at LJ. Let me know what you think.

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Old Warriors

“Sonuvabitch!”

The words exploded out of Malcolm Reynolds’ mouth almost like a sneeze, as he slammed his half-full mug down on the scarred tabletop in surprise.

The hulking figure that stood in the bar’s doorway, silhouetted against the glaring midday sun, could only belong to one man. He was still massive and carried himself with an assurance born of a lifetime of brawls and battles, still as heavily armed as the day they’d parted ten years before.

Mal stood up from the table and craned his neck. Graying at the temples, but still lean and handsome, he wore his much-mended and stained brown leather duster like a second skin. He chuckled to himself. Never figured that hún dàn’d still be alive after all these years.

The big man spotted him and plowed through the crowd and over to the table. He was grinning from ear to ear, one big ham of a hand reaching to grasp the one Mal extended and the other clasping the Browncoat’s shoulder fondly.

“Can’t believe yer still wearin’ that raggedy-ass coat, Cap’n,” he laughed. “It’s gorramned good to see ya.”

“Have a seat, Jayne. Good to see you, too.” Mal waved at the waitress, then leaned closer and chuckled as he grasped the worn lapels of the duster and glanced down at them, “Yeah, I still drag it out on occasions, ‘though, if the truth be told, it’s well on the way to fallin’ apart.”

The waitress smiled at both men and asked, “What can I bring ya?”

Mal l

Comments
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 17:12
I like this. Nicely sentimental.
" The more things change, the more they stay the same. " Indeed they do.
Sorry to hear about Inara. Sad but appropriate. I would be interested in finding out what happened to the rest. Are you planning to write more?
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 18:40
Thanks for commenting. Initially, I wanted to have the piece lead the reader to a lot of questions, to be very open-ended. Who won the Rebellion? What happened to the others?
Life is like that - not always neat closures.

That being said, I hadn't even planned to write this fic and it just "happened", so who knows... there may indeed be more to this tale. I'm just glad you enjoyed it.
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 19:31
Really enjoyed it too. Would like to see the results of the tussle in addition to all the other questions.
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 19:52
Hey, fellow Tarheel! Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Hmmm, so a tale about the tussle? Now that hadn't even occurred to me.

*My muse sits up and takes notice... "Don't wanna cook supper. Wanna play NOW!" Patience, you.*
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 21:25
oh, listen to the minx Muse...some days, you beg her to play and she says she's too tired or something...ya hafta take the time she offers ya!
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 21:25
in other words, write! more!
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 21:29
This was great and I loved it that Mal and Jayne immediately had that ease of familiarity and friendship from their time together when the crew was still in one piece. I would love to not only see the bar fight but also hear what happened to the others. Maybe afterwards when they reminisce in their gaol cell and talk about the others. Whatever. This is a damn shiny piece of work, anything to Keep Flyin' - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 April 2007 07:57
I think this is great.

>Graying at the temples, but still lean and handsome ...

What a wonderful description of an older Mal. So he still has his hair too ... sexy.
Sunday, 08 April 2007 05:38
So...what the fudge happened to Kaylee, Simon, Zoe and River? Cuz I presume they're dead one and all...though the lack of details certain leaves their fates officially open;)

Still...this was a lovely piece of work here, HGG! Much as Mal and Jayne undoubtedly got on each other's last nerve for most of the time they worked together...I can imagine Joss setting up a scene like this. A possibly final hurrah for two valiant warriors who themselves doubted would make it to old age:D

BEB

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