THIS IS A PORN
NC-17
The characters, while already existing, were used in this story. At no time did I/will I, ever make a profit on this story. You have been warned; DO NOT give me feedback unless it is to help me improve my writing.
The “Good” Book.
The water rhythmically cascaded down the light brown body of Shepard Book. Despite the fact that he had already showered earlier that morning, the sound of the water striking the floor helped him clear his mind, something that at this moment in time, he desperately needed. His thoughts, in spite of his best efforts, drifted back to the previous night. As the thoughts played out in his head, the only consolation he had was that his training as a spy for the Alliance prepared him for any situation. He was able to do what was needed to accomplish the “mission” regardless of the circumstances. A fact he was very thankful for after his first guest had left, and the second arrived not too long afterwards.
The clock on the Shepard’s wall showed 2am, and for some reason unknown even to him, he was not able to sleep. The metallic thumping on his door surprised him, not because it caught him off guard, but because it came at such an ungodly hour. What surprised him however, was who was standing there as the door opened. Kaylee.
“Shepard, I’m sorry to wake you up, but I really need to talk,” Kaylee said.
“Of course, come on in.”
As Kaylee came inside and took a seat, she began talking, mainly about how Simon didn’t seem to react to her advances. Unfortunately, Book only heard some of it. He was too busy, shamefully so, thinking about Kaylee and his lusty feelings towards her, something that he had hoped time on the ship and study would have cured. His mind kept drifting to her statement about Simon not reacting to her advances; it was something that shocked him. He had found Kaylee incredibly attractive ever since he had arrived on the ship; he just never took it to the next level.
Kaylee, seeming to have sensed what the Shepard was really thinking,
A side note...one phrase, third paragraph from the end, seems to be incomplete. I believe the missing word is "beat", between "losing a" and "he quickly". For reference, your sentence is...
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Turning his own body at the same time, never losing a he quickly began plowing into her doggy style.
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And to those who cannot get past the "omg-Firefly-porn" idea, grow up. Why is it acceptable to think it, to see the nuances on our dvd's, but not to express it in writing?
Thanks, WhiteKnight, for an interesting journey. Where's part2?
::huggles::
as jayne would say "i'll be in my bunk"
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