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Dancin' - 1/3

Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Mal/Inara - smut with a bit of angst. Those two, crazy kids finally give into their passions. NC-17.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3648    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: Kaynara, Kaynara, Kaynara - this litte one-off is all her fault ... she kept begging and begging for me to write some Mal/Inara smut - and I caved. *sigh* Oh well ...

Thanks to Kaynara for the beta as well. If you hate this, it's all her fault - if you love it, well, it's because I'm a genius writer! :op

Please read and comment - I hope to have Chapter 3 of my prompt series, The Right To Love, up by tomorrow - stay tuned!

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Dancin’

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The muffled shouts of the crew returning from a mission reached Inara all the way in her shuttle. Her hairbrush freezing partway through its stroke, she listened for Mal’s voice, relieved to hear him bellowing orders as the cargo bay door clanked into place and the whine of Serenity’s engines permeated the air.

Listening for a second more, her heartbeat sped up rapidly as she heard Zoe call for Simon. With barely another thought, Inara pulled her dressing gown tight about her and rushed out to the catwalk, her still damp hair fanning out behind her.

With wide, brown eyes, she scanned the scene below, trying to assess who exactly was hurt. She saw Zoe, standing over someone and Inara’s anxiety rose tenfold. It was no secret the first mate was partial to Mal, for her to be so concerned now … praying she was wrong, Inara made it down to the bay’s floor, rushing up to the side of the mule, frantically trying to ascertain who was bleeding.

Later she would curse her transparency. Since Miranda it seemed that her emotions were on constant display and while she had always secretly envied Kaylee for the woman’s ability to feel so deeply, Inara found the lack of emotional control disconcerting. But she seemed loathed to stop it. Of course, Mal didn’t help. The man still had the ability to push every button she owned and she was fairly certain he’d installed some himself. He could rile her, silence her and weaken her with a look and Inara wondered how he’d gotten so adept at reading her emotions – and when she’d become so incapable of int

Comments
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 18:55
Wow. And wow again. That is so ... and now what? Do they go back to the bitching and sniping, or just to bed? Please, tell me more!
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 19:38
Wow Tamsibling is back I couldnt stand up at my desk for 10 minutes.Super hot story please start something long I ...we miss your fantastic style.
WHELP
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 20:01
Eek, risky buisness
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 21:58
Oh Wow, that was so hot! I was half expecting Jayne to turn up and sell tickets. Very daring just trusting that no one would walk in on them which probably made it even hotter but at last they finally get it together. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 00:54
oh... WOW!!! lol, super shiney smut scenes =D PLEASE PLEASE continue this!!! And dear merciful buddha make this a romance and not have them go back to the bitchin' and snipein' *begs*
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 01:30
*wall-eyed stare before slowing falling over*

Oh...Tian Yesu...that was all kinds of "GUH!" worthy, TamSibling! I think I can't move from hot frickin' hot that was!

;D

More! We need more and stat!

BEB
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 01:51
Taking one step closer and thereby pressing their bodies together in the tight space, Mal took her by the shoulders and whispered, “Yeah, you do.”

Oh, I can just hear Nathan saying that. Yum. ;)

Thank you, TamSibling :)
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 01:52
More, huh? Well ...


This was meant to be a one-off, but I suppose I could be persuaded (read: bribed) to continue it ... I have no idea what it would evolve into (okay, that's a bit of a fib, I have about five Mal/Inara-centric story ideas floating around in my brain, so I could probably use one of those plots, I just hadn't planned on it.)

If you guys are serious and would read more M/I from me, let me know and maybe I'll indulge you ... stay tuned!
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 02:27
Yes, there should definatly be more.
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 02:50
Oh my goodness! *fans self* Hoo boy, that was steamy! Anyone have a cigarette? LOL
Sequels is nice...
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 02:54
First read this at lunch and had to go back to work-I almost didn't make it.

More, more please-pretty please.
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 07:58
Wuh. My word, that was all kinds of hot. Is there going to be a sequel?

Vera

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