Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Cold Comfort

Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Mal takes care of a sick Inara. Sequel of sorts to The Worst Medicine.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3777    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Word Count: 1159

Spoilers: None.

Characters/Pairing: Mal/Inara

Rating: PG

A/N: A sequel of sorts to The Worst Medicine, written for Agent Rouka who is feeling unwell and wanted some cuddling.

Cold Comfort

by 2x2

Balancing the tray of soup in one hand, Mal opened the shuttle door and knocked softly. He stepped inside, listening for a reprimand, but heard only silence. The room, softly lit under normal circumstances, was almost completely dark except for the small, warm flicker coming from a lantern near the bed.

Inara sneezed violently, groaning pitifully, eyes puffy and red.

"Still feelin' bad, huh?" Mal said and she glared at him.

“This is your fault, you know,” Inara said, her voice slightly nasal.

He blinked, surprised that she would so openly reference what had happened a few days earlier in his bunk. “Yeah, conjure that’s so,” he said, apologetically. He cleared his throat roughly. “About that—”

She groaned again, a frustrated sound. "What do you want? Is there some particular reason you've barged in here this time?"

"Actually, I knocked," he said, sitting on the edge of the bed beside her carefully.

She sniffed loudly and wiped at her nose with a tissue miserably. "Is that supposed to make me feel better?"

"Brought ya some soup," he offered, holding up the tray to show her.

"I'm not hungry," she said petulantly, and Mal had to bite back a grin. Of all the things he'd come to expect from Inara, pouting wasn't one of them.

"I made this special for ya, an' ya ain't even gonna eat none?"

"Mal…" she whined as he helped her to sit

"C'mon, just a little," he coaxed, bringing the spoon to her lips.

She accepted the liquid with a grimace, turning her head as she forced it down, pushing the hand with another spoonful of soup away. "I can't," she said, fighting the urge to bring it back up.

"Simon says you gotta eat—"

"Mal, please… I can't, not right now," she begged and he acquiesced finally, unable to bring himself to push her. He set th

Comments
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 01:36
this is really sweet, but now i'm curious about this "the worst medicine"... i can't find it in blue sun! help!

but again, sweet and well done.
2X2
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 02:06
Oh! I thought I'd posted that here ages ago... That has now been remedied :o) Thank-you for pointing that out, and thank-you for reading and commenting!
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 05:01
CUTE AND A HALF. i have been slayed by the cuteness and the warmthness and the...loveliness. Other -ness words. Hee. I loved it.
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 05:17
Yay! Two fics from 2x2! Life is sweet!

Your Mal and Inara are always perfect. Puts a dippy little fangirl grin on my face. But now I'm going to bed, cuz I'm dumb and should be in bed instead of reading your lovely fic...
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 06:13
Beautiful and heartwarming! You've got to love Mal and Inara when they finally get something right. It's just a shame one of them has to be almost delirious with fever.

Might we see another chapter in this series? When they're both well and have to deal with the consequences of their actions?
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 09:21
Really loved this. Sweet and tender without being saccharine. I could so see Inara unbending in this way and accepting what she wanted to help her sleep, and it made me smile the thought of Mal wanting to help and care for her. Also, the bit where she knows just what he is thinking about that bed was wonderful. Good story, want more. Ali D :~)
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Tuesday, 20 March 2007 11:26
Keen
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 12:11
this was lovely
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 15:19
Completely ab fab, 2x2! As I have noted in another feedback comment for another tale posted to the BSR...these two need to be under the influence to get really mushy 'less they've crossed their bridge;D

And now I wants to read me some "The Worst Medicine;D"

BEB
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 23:23
awww i loved it!!!

very in character and definetely a good follow up to "the worst medicine"

I thought the ending was great too... very like Inara just to say something like that then leave it...

OO765
Wednesday, 02 May 2007 00:16
Thoroughly, *thoroughly* sweet. Well done.

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