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Firefly Doctor Who Crossover Chapter Four: Reflection

Tuesday, March 13, 2007

“Captivity leaves time for reflection, but who else is rethinking their positions?” I think these get worse as I go. GEEZ, Come on. They’re short enough chapters, it’s hard to get you interested AND not spoil anything.

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Simultaneous: Serenity : Feds searching the crew quarters (search part five)

Now the five soldiers split up. One to each of the crew bunks, including the empty that no one used.

Inner Simultaneous sequence: Serenity . Fed searches Kaylee’s bunk

While looking through Kaylee’s bunk, the soldier assigned to search the bunk managed to damage the frippery that was her layer-cake hoop-skirt sheep-on-its-hind-legs dress. Other adornments, those of a less expensive but of equal-or-higher sentimental value to her found themselves damaged as well, and the room was in a higher state of disarray than it usually was: by the time the soldier left the room, it was in turmoil.

Inner Simultaneous sequence: Serenity : Fed searches Mal’s bunk

In Mal’s bunk, the leader of the soldiers slowed down: he knew the bunk he’s searching is Mal’s because of the motif in the room. This particular soldier had been briefed on the crew members to the exclusion of the others because of two simple facts: a) he was the leader of this little group, and b) he’d fought in the battle of Serenity Valley. In a convoluted sort of way, he and Mal were kindred souls, he realized. They’d both survived the fighting, and they’d both survived the time of negotiation before they were pulled out. Though Mal had lost his faith in Serenity, he’d found his.

In respect for a man who’d gone through the same things he had, the leader of these otherwise rash soldiers didn’t trash Mal’s bunk; indeed, he was very careful in his searching, only moving things that he would put back as closely as he reasonably could. He looked through the stuff in the bunk, all while evolving respect for this man. When he saw Mal’s Independent-hued and aptly named browncoat, he fingered it with a strange respect. As he pondered this seemingly insignificant item of clothing, he found himself regarding it not only as a career-army Alliance soldier would, but as a person would. A person who had their own individual thoughts. He found in it a summation of

Comments
Tuesday, 13 March 2007 18:43
Hmmm...as great as these scenes were, the lack of the Doctor and Rose kinda made things feel...flat:(

Still...can't wait to see the next part though;)

BEB
Tuesday, 13 March 2007 21:55
Well, I found it's FAR too Doctor heavy later... so, it'll balance. I was also trying to keep these chapters short, 'cos... Thanks for review though; makes me feel good to know that people care enough to make it worth the risk to post that at school, via proxy. XD
Thursday, 15 March 2007 11:01
hey hey hey - dont mock the greatest and longest running sci fi program in the whole world (SG1 be dammed) - hope we get to some action soon - but it has great potential that is been released, the soldiers trashing Serenity is a bit far fetched i think but go with it

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