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Firefly Doctor Who Crossover Chapter 2: Nien Mohn

Tuesday, February 13, 2007

“Okay, Rose and Nine weren’t received well at all. But further ill looms on the horizon for crew and visitors alike.”
Yeah, I still suck at this little summary stuff. You ought to just read it, eh?

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Serenity : Bridge: Perspective: Wash

Mal had gotten the rest of the crew up, and he’d put Wash to the task of finding out if there was anything nearby they needed to worry about. With a yawn and a groan of displeasure at being roused this early, when he already put in late hours on the bridge alone, he’d gotten up. As he sat alone ( yet again , he sighed) on the bridge of Serenity , he kept scanning for any ships from which their latest visitors could have come from. But there were only so many times one could repeat the same process over and over again without getting horribly bored of it. He’d been working for a while, scanning different frequencies as well, just to see if there were any waves going about that he could pick up on, like a transmission that could possibly be being sent to the impromptu visitors. Though, as is his wont, Wash ended up playacting with his dinosaurs, a sanity preserving activity if ever there was in such a lonely task.

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Serenity : Perspective: Mal (with assorted others)

Once Mal had gotten her up, Kaylee and Mal had gone back to the engine room, to find out what that blue box was. Mal stood in the door, to give Kaylee her room, just in case he might do something to get in her way, but he was anxious to know why the thing was there, how it got there, and what their “visitors” were doing in such a small box anyway. As Kaylee was looking about, she almost stepped on the little device that Zoe’d dropped, and, not recognizing it as one of hers, she picked it up and examined it.

“This ain’t one o’ mine, cap’n. You know where it came from? Sure is neat, little thing, but I couldn’t tell you what it is for my life.” Kaylee was fascinated by the thing, and turned it round and round, examining the thing end to end. It was just about a hand span in length, and in some places, about as thick around as her finger, with a little head bit at one end.

“I think that’ll be the bit Zoe saw drop from the guy’s pocket when she picked ‘im up to take ‘im down to t

Comments
Tuesday, 13 February 2007 02:32
It was great, what more can I say?
Tuesday, 13 February 2007 06:28
Uh...really stupid question. Shouldn't the Alliance cruiser's CO know what Simon and River look like? Cuz while I know they would eventually get found, even if they hid out on the hull again...this seems too OOC for this moment in time:(

Still...I can't wait to see how Rose and the Doctor start messing with the Alliance's heads;D

BEB
Tuesday, 13 February 2007 21:10
Yeah... but... >.> I'll figure out eventually. Hell will rain when I write chapter six. And... *evil laugh* who said that was the CO? I just said a fed. Didn't I? *double check like a moron* Yes. Just the official in charge of these soldiers. Which means Mr. I-am-in-charge-of-the-ship is gonna have to show up eventually now...

But plot holes will turn into black holes once I figure out that I've not found them. And, actually, I think I address teh "OMG, they don't know who we are?" from Simon... next chapter. Yes. That means... *bum bum bum* next chapter is for you! (By you I mean YOU, BEB.)
Tuesday, 13 February 2007 23:48
Sweet! Can I request something for a later chapter past what you've written? Kaylee seeing the inside of the TARDIS. The level and energy of the "Squee!" would be earthshattering;D

BEB
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 10:11
This was really cool Fizz. There were some cool moments. I liked the part where Rose spots River for the first time. I can imagine that happening. Also, the part where Mal scoffed at the use of the word 'companion' to describe Rose was believable.

I also liked the line by The Doctor, where he said: “Haven’t the foggiest. We’re just getting to the wondering that ourselves, how we got here. Do I get a question now? Where are we?” That was 100% Christopher Eccleston. I could hear his voice when reading that.

All of the character voices were bang on. The Big Damn Heroes, The Doctor and Rose seem to royally screwed right now. This is shaping up to be a great crossover so far!

- Cos.
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 20:19
Ah, gladz I can do something write! (yesh. I know, bad on the spelling, but it makes for good puns.)

These old chapters make me feel so secure - I feel sketchy about the solidity of five and six. I luvz you Cos, and needed something to make me happy today. Thanks for taking part.

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