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Father
Friday, January 5, 2007
Its basically how i feel my relationship with my father is...
CATEGORY: FILK TIMES READ: 2008 RATING: 9.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
You don't understand
What you put me through
What I do for you
How hard I work for you
How I re-arrange my life for you
That I cry at night for you
That you hurt me
I do everything I can
More than I should
I push and push
Try my hardest
Until I can't
Until I am warn out
Emotionally
Physically
Financally
You don't understand
And you never will
While you live in your world
Demanding me in it
While I can't tell you
That I can't let you in mine
Don't want to try anymore
That I can't live like this
Comments
Monday, 08 January 2007 01:31
Wow...that's some beautifully powerful stuff here, Slice. Not even sure how to properly praise you for such a personal piece of poetry...
BEB
BEB
Monday, 08 January 2007 18:30
Slicie, I hope and hope your father reads this, and, by doing so, reads you and your lovely heart at last. It's a gift with words you have, and this here is one of your best.
Love you, Honey. Keep writing. It's giving some Slice to the 'verse, and it's a goodness.
Love you, Honey. Keep writing. It's giving some Slice to the 'verse, and it's a goodness.
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