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CHECK MATE: Deep Blue. (16/22)

Tuesday, July 6, 2004

Sex and death. How very classical of me!

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We all know Joss Whedon is a genius. This time let's hear it for the amazing cast of his glorious show.

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CHECK MATE: Deep Blue.

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There are the moments before when he floats, weightless on the edge of the precipice. Pure spirit. With no past, only future. An infinite, inviting future studded with brillant stars. He hardly dares breathe, for in this glorious, painful state of anticipation, the slightest inhalation makes the crackling energy smouldering at his every nerve ending burst into searing heat.

He waits. Balanced, yet ready to fall.

And then her mouth is on him. Hot, greedy. Sucking, pushing, pulling, devouring. Her tongue swivels and slicks, hard and yielding by turns.

He tries to keep it all in. Resist the reflex to arch and thrust. Tries to just be. Let himself be in the now.

His hands clench against the sheets.

And then he is falling, heavy as a stone, plummeting into her. With her. Through time and space and beyond. Without and within everything is rushing. He can't breathe fast enough, move quickly enough, get deep enough.

A shudder and he bursts. Heat and light exploding into a 'verse of his own creation, filled with galaxies of new stars, each orbited by perfect worlds where no desire goes unfulfilled, no dream unrealized. Pleasure so intense he loses himself in it.

The coming back is a sadness but she smiles at him and he knows he is safe. He twists a dark curl around his finger.

“I thought I'd lost you. I didn't think you'd come back to me.”

“I will always come back to you. You're on my crew. And in my heart. I could never leave you.”

“Promise?”

“Cross my heart and hope to die.”

... It's only a dream. But an undeniably shiny one. Mal stretches out luxuriously in his bed. He crosses his arms behind his head and smiles to himself.

Yup. It's gonna be a real good day.

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“You wait here – keep a look out,” Mal says suddenly and before Zoe can ask why, he dives into a store. Her eyes slide up and down the street, looki

Comments
Tuesday, 06 July 2004 11:27
hope we get to see the next chapter soon!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 06 July 2004 17:45
Aieeee! Torment us a little more, why don'tcha? Shiny as usual - anxiously awaiting further developments. HurrySundown
Tuesday, 06 July 2004 19:14
From the heights of joy to the depths of anguish, all in one chapter. And those were some fine heights, too. Good storytelling!
Tuesday, 06 July 2004 22:27
Wow, please don't let Inara be dead - I couldn't bear to see the Cappy that unhappy after all that sunshine and laughter to have his joy squashed out of him so brutally would be very cruel. This was so well written and I can't wait for the next part but am holding my breath too, hoping Simon can work some magic on what looks like a pretty sad tableau. It certainly would be the shiniest way for him to repay Mal's little gift. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 07 July 2004 09:34
Speaking of evil mastermind... ;-) Inara and the captain, wanting them all well and back together, but waiting on Zoe and her reaction to Inara. Delightfuly conplex and conflicted!

Golly, but you play them well. I am totally in to Zoe's edges of suspicions about Wash.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 12 July 2004 17:56
Now I know you aren't killin' off Inara, cos if you do you'll have an angry mob on your hands. Plus I want to see her and Zoe have a discussion, perhaps have Zoe get to know 'the real' Inara. Keep up the excellent work, and please hurry!!!
-Blackeyedgurl

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