Secrets
Monday, November 27, 2006
Sequel to "Going Well" Simon/Kaylee and... other 'ships.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 3499 RATING: 9.0 (PG13) SERIES: FIREFLY
Rating: PG-13 (I don't really think it is but just to be safe)
Disclaimer: All characters in this fanfic (so far muhahaha) belong to Joss Whedon.
AN: Un-betad, a couple people have offered and I've e-mailed them but I haven't gotten any replies and patience is a virtue that I do not posess. It's Simon/Kaylee and that's all I'm gonna say 'cause I don't want to give anything away. This one is longer than "Going Well", I am going to turn this into a longish series. I would read "Going Well" first otherwise you might get a wee bit confuzzled. Also I have a question, why are these little blurbs called "AN"s? I think I might call 'em something different from now on.
Secrets
Inara was redecorating her shuttle when she heard a frantic banging on her door. When she opened it Kaylee was standing in front of the door looking very much in a hurry but not overall unhappy.
“Mei mei what is it?” Inara asked worriedly.
“’Nara do you have any contraceptive shots on you?”
Inara stared puzzled by Kaylee’s question until Kaylee spoke up.
“Oh my god that’s right I haven’t told you yet! Me, me and Simon are well, together” Kaylee had been so busy with Simon, she hadn’t even had the time to tell Inara.
“I’m so happy for you honey. Here I always keep extras.” Inara handed Kaylee five needles.
“Thanks a lot ‘Nara”
“Anytime mei mei, just make sure you come to me later with all the details” With that Kaylee ran off .
On her way out she bumped into the Captain. She was sure he would have said something about shipboard relationships considering the fact that she was carrying a handful of contraceptive shots. All he did was stammer for a second and then mumble “Ah, um… Captainy things” as if he had done something wrong. She continued to run off to Simon. Kaylee was so busy thinking on Simon that she missed the Captain walking into Inara’s shuttle.
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Kaylee and Simon had just finished with another amazingly passionate interlude when Simon realized he hadn’t yet talked to
The 'A/N' I believe is shorthand for Authors Note. But then I don't post my fic (it's not ready yet, and my beta's are seeminlgy illiterate), so I could be wrong.
;)
Still...great work, Gomithrous! Definitely could see these situations in my head, though the dialogue seems a tad bit off for the characters. But's OK! Getting into the swing of thigns and all that;)
BEB
P.S. Wanted a response to your e-mail, huh? Cao...well, I am totally open for business for doing beta work. You want one, you got one;)
You can't take the sky from me
OK, I'll talk!
I liked it. Keep writing.
I find that going back and watching from time to time really helps with getting the voices right(er). It can be hard to wrap your head around a different way of talkin'.
Contraceptive shots, but five of them. Short term?
(Sorry I'm a nurse at a women's health clinic. Depo Provera lasts slightly over 12 weeks. Are we regressing in the future?!)
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