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Best Intentions, ch. 12

Thursday, November 23, 2006

Post-BDM. Simon has a very important question for Kaylee and finally gets things right. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara

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A/N: This is unabashed fluff, something nice and light for Thanksgiving so you'll still have room for all that turkey. Enjoy!

Please keep those comments coming, they make my day.

And thanks to Leiasky for always reading my stuff ... even when I know she's swamped.

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Best Intentions, ch. 12

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Two hours later Kaylee was more than ready. Inara, the expert artist that she was, had used all the tools at her disposal to simply enhance Kaylee’s natural beauty. Her cheeks glowed with a rosy hue, her eyes bright and wide were surrounded by shadow and liner, her lips were full; her honey brown hair Inara had left long, opting to curl it in soft waves that fell to her shoulders and suited Kaylee. Nothing on her mei mei should ever be pinned back or restrained; she was a free spirit and Inara wanted to honor that, as she knew it was one of the chief reasons Simon had fallen for her so completely.

Kaylee stood in front of the floor length mirror in the master bedroom, smoothing her hands down the front of the green silk sheath she had donned. The fabric was shiny and rich, a slit running up one side to her mid-thigh – luckily not the side of her broken leg which was still a bit thin and pale compared to her other. Turning slightly, Kaylee admired the back of the dress, a deep scoop exposing her back, while the front of the dress sat right on her collarbone.

With a tentative smile, the young woman finally turned to her friends, both women sitting on the edge, admiring Kaylee as she admired herself. She was absolutely radiant. “Well?” Kaylee asked, her grin widening as River jumped off the bed and hugged her tight.

“Love you,” she whispered into the girl’s hair, knowing what was to transpire that evening and more than excited by the prospect of having an actual sister.

“I love you too, sweetie,” Kaylee said, a bit surprised by the girl’s reaction, but hugging her all the same.

“You look stunning, Kaylee,” Inara said, stepping forward and brushing some of the hair fro

Comments
Thursday, 23 November 2006 16:10
that was shiny
Thursday, 23 November 2006 17:23
...wow, VERY nice. Love it: SQUEEE at the proposal, :( at the seizure. you are a powerful writer :)
Thursday, 23 November 2006 18:46
Something about weddings about at the moment, obviously! Very shiny. And I am jealous of your talent!
Thursday, 23 November 2006 20:33
Please don't let anything bad happen to Kaylee. I love it that Simon finally asked her to marry him and of course she said yes! I hope the clot clears on its' own and that we get to see the shiniest wedding in the 'verse! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 23 November 2006 20:55
Great chapter, so full of love and fluffiness that even Doc Eli called his wife :D If only that would rub of on Mal a little more ;)

Now I loved your angst in the beginning of the story, but no turning Kaylee into a vegetable in future chapters, dong ma?

Friday, 24 November 2006 03:23
Aw...cao...comment didn't get posted before my computer crapped out:(

Ok...here goes attempt # 2: brillo work with the proposal and Simon/Eli moment, TamSibling! Definitely loving how you're mixing and matching fluff and angst with skill;D

Gotta admit though...really don't think River was referring to the Fryes when she uttered the "parents" cryptic comment. Or at least not JUST the Fryes. Cuz we need more parental angst from the Tams, damn it!

:D

BEB
Friday, 24 November 2006 06:00
Can't agree with BEB more: This fic is so incredibly well balanced, in all respects...makes a writer jealous.

I loved River in this, I thought you've captured her really well, so bouncy and happy, and speech pattern is spot on.

The little engage between Simon and Eli was brilliant, and Simon is considering a little doctoring at the hospital? This should be interesting.

The whole scene in the hospital room was perfect, and Mal was hilarious.

Wonderful chapter, and can't wait for no. 13!
Friday, 24 November 2006 07:24
Nice scenes. The Kaylee/Simon moments were very wonderful.

Again going to swim against the current and dare to hope you'll kill Kaylee off? It'd made for some really good angst ...
Saturday, 25 November 2006 13:50
Awesome chapter, very sweet, but...
'I don’t wanna die'
That broke my heart.
Monday, 27 November 2006 15:32
The proposal was so well done. Nice and different from ones that I've read in the past. That she had a seizure right after that was such an emotional slap after being all happy about Simon finally asking her to marry him! Nicely done :)

>“Did she pass out before or after you asked her?”

I still LOVE Eli and his easy banter with both Simon and Kaylee.
Wednesday, 29 November 2006 11:46
Shiny chapter, and I really liked the bit about the zoo (made me really want to go visit one).

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