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CHECK MATE: Bad Bishop (15/22)

Thursday, June 24, 2004

Book finally explains how a preacher know so damn much about all manner of unseemly things.

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CHECKMATE: Bad Bishop.

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One look at the grey tinge to Mal's cheeks convinces Serenity's crew that the Doctor's not wrong. The Captain really is in serious need of some quiet. They climb the ladder out of his bunk in awkard, anxious silence. In the walkway above, they hesitate, unsure what they should do next.

Zoe assumes command. “Looks like it's your call, Jayne. Cap'n's main concern is findin' Inara an' he's relyin' on you to get the job done. Where'd we start?” If Mal weren't in such a bad way she'd be calling him all manner of stupid for fretting about the whereabouts of that murderous bitch. As things stand, her loyalty to him outweighs other considerations. And finding Inara does offer the prospect of pay-back.

Jayne forces himself to put aside his resentment at Mal's reaction to his admission that he'd thrown the Companion off the ship. At the way he'd made him feel lower than the dirt on his boots. When Jayne had only been tryin' to help.

He glares defiantly back at Zoe. He might not be as smart as her but he's the best tracker in the whole gorram 'verse. And she ruttin' well needs his know-how. He ain't gonna put up with being looked down on. “Better tell your husband to set a course for Persephone,” he tells her, ignoring the fact that Wash is standing right there next to him. “And whilst you're at it, you might ask him why the hell Inara would wanna poison him in the first place!”

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Wash flicks the switches on the panel above his head and begins entering coordinates into the nav system. “We're a long way out,” he tells Zoe, who's standing behind him, staring out into the Black, “It's gonna take best part of two weeks to reach Persephone from here.”

“Uh-huh,” she says, not really listening. Her mind's somewhere else. Somewhere even less pleasant than in hot pursuit of her husband's would-be assassin on a ship whose Captain – not seven days ago - was hanging from the end of a rope. She feels trapped, manipulated, like a piece being moved around a ches

Comments
Thursday, 24 June 2004 13:15
Whoa...

Shiny.
Thursday, 24 June 2004 15:10
Hooo, that was creepy and morbifyingly good. But is everything Book tells them now true or has he trimmed the fat off it? Well done, can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 24 June 2004 16:17
Wow... spellbinding. Just... wow!

I particularly liked Zoe in this--very well played, the hint of suspicion at her husband in just the right dose.
Thursday, 24 June 2004 17:23
WOW !!! A kick in the gut. It works ! You have the pace of the show down pat. Want more !!!!!!
Thursday, 24 June 2004 18:10
Excellent story-within-story. Poses as many quesitons as it answers. Fascinating. Do we HAVE to wait two weeks, though?
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 June 2004 20:58
I'm too lazy to log in, but HOT DAMN I love this story so much. I reckon I'd like to call it the BDS (Big Damn Story). I hope it's not two weeks cos you've got me all sorts of sucked in!!
-Blackeyedgurl, Adrianna

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