Malcolm Reynolds was in a hurry.
Serenity would be touching down soon on Beline, and that meant he needed to quit screwing around with work and get himself ready. Jayne and Zoë could see to the rest of the cargo prepping. No that there was a great deal to prep. They were transporting fuel cells which had somehow managed to get mislaid at an Alliance weigh station, and being paid quite well for them, the first really good coin they had turned in about a month.
This, however, had absolutely nothing to do with why mal was in a hurry.
He was in a hurry because in a short bit of time, they would physically be on Beline, and on Beline was a hotel, the Abelard Arms. Mal didn’t have the slightest idea what the name meant, since the town it was in was called Winston, not Abelard, nor did he particularly care. Inside the Abelard Arms was a woman, and this woman held a spot in Mal’s heart that no one on Serenity had any idea about.
Her name was Annabelle Syrtis, and after what seemed like a lifetime of silence, she was waved Mal aboard Serenity, asking him how he was. No one on board Serenity knew anything about this. Mal had a secure comm channel in his quarters, enabling him to reach out or receive without anyone on board knowing about it.
Mal had very nearly fallen over when her wave came into him, and he wasn’t too sure how actually to respond. For that matter, he wasn’t entirely sure whether or not to respond. The silence that had existed between them had spanned well over a year, with a few feeble, ham-handed attempts on his part to reach out to her, none of them ever amounting to a hill of go-se. Mal had run the gamut of emotions during this time: loss, resentment, anger, self-doubt, but all he ever had to work with, largely, was pure silence. Every voice of logic living inside his head told him not to respond to her wave, even while he was doing it.
Beline was the planet where Mal had actually found and purchased Serenity. In a way, the planet was a birthplace to almost every aspect of Mal’s life after
So what about a sequel? I think Mal could surely use some Inara-comfort to heal his wounded heart!
You can't take the sky from me
I did like the scene between Inara and River, because it shows Inara's nurturing instincts very well. That worked for my understanding of them.
But I found it a bit unrealistic that Zoe would even venture that sort of information, which is a very rudely disrespectful thing to do to her Captain, and she has never once tried to interfere in this way. Leave alone between him and Inara. It seems almost sadistic toward Inara, really.
Mal having some sort of deeply burning love seems also unrealistic since there was never ever any such indication on the show and it should certainly have come up at some point, considering things with Nandi and Inara. And Saffron! Not to mention, Mal's not usually so pathetic. He has a smart brain on him, in particular about the things that hurt.
So, the subject matter itself is an interesting attempt, but my advice would be to very carefully consider what sort of behavior the characters would truly engage in.
I agree with Agent rourka about the dealing of information to some extent (but I do not see it as being 'disrespectful'), but the writing compensates more than adequately.
Afterall we all interpret the characters with our own understandings, each one slightly different.
While I respect opinion of AgentRouka, I have to disagree with they said about how you had the BDHs acts here. River was completely spot on, as I could totally see her being the Greek Chorus for the various feelings being held by Mal, Zoe and Inara about this situation. Mal, Zoe and Inara? There's a tougher question to answer.
I think it would be quite plausible that someone like Annabelle could have existed in Mal's life before the series, if only because Mal would have needed someone who could fill the emptiness Mal would have felt after the war like Wash did with Zoe. Only problem is that he made one hell of a poor choice (no offense meant for any parallels to your own self, browncoatjim) by taking up with a woman who was a wife and mother already(the one thing I can agree with AgentRouka is that Mal would have been more of a friend and surrogate father to Annabelle and Jared) whose husband was not evil (neglectful yeah, but not abusive it seems). The ending only cements the fact that Annabelle, while probably meaning well, was selfish and not as honourable as Mal through her lack of contact with Mal and her final seduction before she ran off with a third party (screwing over two men, 'less her husband had died or divorced her).
I would like to see more of this storyline, if only to witness the crew (or just Inara) making an attempt at comforting Mal. Could always consider it positive therapy to get all the ghosts out for your ownself...
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The thing about BrowncoatsJim's writing is that it is gritty. no one is perfect, and he shows it well in his writing of the characters.
Annabel is a wonderfully flawed character. Not evil, but still in the wrong.
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